| "Sovereign Destiny" Reviews/Comments [ 39 ] |
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Reviewed By: yue no rei (ff.net) On: October 13, 2006 09:34 CDT
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ho hum. look like completion was a lot simpler than expected but i wonder if that really is all there is to it
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Reviewed By: yue no rei (ff.net) On: September 26, 2006 07:56 CDT
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hmmm the counsel has finally been called and looks like the curtains are drawing closer unless the unexpected arises. keep up the great work
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Reviewed By: KagomeoftheSouth [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2006 13:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey keep up the updates! this story just gets better and better! please update asap!!
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Reviewed By: kizuna4me [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2006 16:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update! I love this story and can't wait to see what happens!
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Reviewed By: SpottedCow On: September 10, 2006 04:02 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was nothing short of skeptical when I considered a Koenma pairing, but am very pleased I took a chance. Great job melding Inu and YYH worlds- its unique and thankfully not the trite 'someone trips over Kagome in a forest' or 'someone is her cousin/childhood friend/classmate' not that I don't read stories like that anyway, but still major points for the execution of such a creative concept. I'm excited to read more and so far am pleased with each character's development especially the inter-relationships so I've got faith that the future will bring more of the same. If I could make a request though, please please do not have any unlikely and doomed to be annoying pairings between any of the demons and humans... thats to say that I'd like to be spared the gag reflex that would come from reading that Sesshomaru/Hiei/Kurama suddenly have an urge to mate Shizuru or even Botan. I figure Koga must be mated (if not several times over) and don't expect anything that deathly absurd to happen to Shippo. A sudden fall from bachelorhood by Sess and Hiei within this story would be a sure-fire way to undermine everything that has occured thus far. -- Sorry for the mini-rant, but I am enjoying your story so much that I can't help but give my two cents and ease the bit of anxiety. Can't wait for the update!
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Reviewed By: KagomeoftheSouth [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2006 22:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
tis is a great story i love it ^^ please update asap
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Reviewed By: Bloodcherry [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2006 18:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Numbess?!?! NOOOO! XD Excuse my hyperness... I can't help it! Hahahahaha! So, anyway your story is great so far! This is the first Kagome/Koenma I've read that I like! I haven't read a lot of those, but if you have a great suggestion... I'm in! XD As long as it is well written.... Heh. I hope you can update soon!! Ja ne, Bloodcherry P.s. I just wanted to try if the color worked! XD
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Reviewed By: yue no rei (ff.net) On: August 16, 2006 04:58 CDT
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>< IM BACK! yes! I just read your two chapters and im feeling very pleased now ^^ keep up the story
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Reviewed By: yue no rei (ff.net) On: July 10, 2006 03:55 CDT
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ahhh and so everthing is back on track. I wonder what kazuma's training is....
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Reviewed By: GraveRose On: July 06, 2006 22:53 CDT
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You have a nice story. Hope you update soon! : )
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Reviewed By: yue no rei (ff.net) On: July 04, 2006 05:56 CDT
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hmmm this whole 'completing' thing adds to the twist ne?
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Reviewed By: Kage Otome (Shadow Maiden-NSI) On: June 21, 2006 03:23 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So she's been watching over them for a long time, ne? Hm...I wonder is Koenma jealous? I don't see Kagome really forgiving him easily after what he did (or rather, didn't do) I mean she's loyal, extremely to her friends and loved ones and would never accept someone who 'loves' someone to do nothing when that person is in danger...What could he want to talk about and what about Kurama? Hm...Anyway, keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Anonymouso On: June 21, 2006 02:28 CDT
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What does Koenma have to say to Koenma? Wonder how many will be going against Enma (Yama)?
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Reviewed By: qarry [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2006 12:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. Its story line is so original. I can't wait to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: bluemoon_175 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2006 01:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must say I am at lost for words, your story is very good. Keep up the good work, hope you UPDATE ASAP. PLEASE...PLEASE...PLEASE... Because if you don't I'm going to cry. Good luck. Cya :^)
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