| "Watching Her Sleep" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
Title: Congrats!
Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2013 18:22 EDT
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Congratulations! Your fiction has won an award from the Feudal Association for the July 2013 term! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our Yahoo Group, where the nominating and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Our website is located here: http://feudal.fav.cc/ This terms' fiction winners list can be found here: http://feudal.fav.cc/winners/2013-2/july-2013/ Authors, you may retrieve your awards here: http://feudal.fav.cc/gallery/thumbnails.php?album=116 Links to all of the awards, past or present, can be found here: http://feudal.fav.cc/gallery/index.php Please pick up "site only" awards here: http://feudal.fav.cc/gallery/thumbnails.php?album=116 Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~The Feudal Association |
Title: Congrats!
Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2013 09:06 EDT
Comment/Review:
This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an award guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Current nominations can be found at our website: http://feudal.fav.cc/nominations/current-nominees/ If you're interested in becoming a member of our guild, please visit the Feudal Association: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ **Please note that membership is closed during voting periods. Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our guild! -The Feudal Association **Please note that you may receive this notice more than once if you've been nominated for several awards. |
Reviewed By: ananova [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2010 13:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. That was great. I can definitely see Inuyasha visiting her at night when she's asleep. I love how you explored his feelings and thoughts. And the way you had him tell her he would become human then be confused when she told him no, that was great. Any chance for a sequel planned where the others react to them becoming mates?
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Reviewed By: Witchlit [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2008 03:47 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was an amazing fic. I LOVE your writing. and I really loved how its not the same as all the other one-shots that are so monotonous. their all the same. >_> ............................ anyway, whats with the review under me, okay lady, stfu. Its a one-shot. and an anime, why are you worrying about all those details? Appreciate it for what it is, jeeze. xO
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2008 19:14 EDT
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this is good, but what happens in the morning when kagome's mom opens the door to wake her? also how does everyone on both sides of the well take their mating? i want to see her wedding, wont she get married on each side of the well? please write more.
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Title: ONE OF THE BEST ONE-SHOTS I HAVE EVER READ
Reviewed By: HIME KAGOME 28 On: August 23, 2007 19:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I ABSOLUTELY LOOVED IT !!!!!!! THERE ARE SO MANY STORIES WERE HEY HURT KAGOME I JUST CANT STAND THOSE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU MADE ME FEEL BETTER AFTER READING IT !!!!!!!!!!!!!THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST ONE - SHOTS I HYAVE EVER READ !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! CONTINUE WITH ANOTHER ONE !!!!!! IT WOULD BE SO AWESOME !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Shigure-san [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2007 10:21 EDT
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Awww, this was sweet...and smexy XD
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Reviewed By: appelcline [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2006 15:31 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a pretty standard lemon, but well-written and enjoyable. I particularly liked the exploration of IY's thoughts and feelings at the beginning. I felt like you expressed a lot of things that have been implied in the series but never overtly stated, which is nice. There are a few spelling and grammar mistakes, but nothing that seriously detracted from my enjoyment of the story. Thanks for writing it!
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Reviewed By: Spinner2009 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2006 19:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have to be my favorite fan fic author! I love this fic it was really really good I just adore your style of writing! I plan to review on mating season ( fave fan fic) too, when it sadly comes to an end, though i hope it never happens lol.
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Reviewed By: tetsuya yamatashi (not signed in) On: July 04, 2006 05:07 EDT
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Amazing. You just blew me away with this one. You're definatley one of those people who should NEVER stop writing. Good luck in future works.
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Title: Sweet!
Reviewed By: Kagechick On: June 25, 2006 19:52 EDT
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You're really a good writer! Keep up writing more stories!
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Reviewed By: axel721 On: June 24, 2006 05:12 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you keep re-updating this xD how about a new chapter for it? its a great fic!
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Title: ?
Reviewed By: anime buda On: June 21, 2006 20:58 EDT
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I thought it was great one of the best storys yet.
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Title: ?
Reviewed By: anime buda On: June 21, 2006 20:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought it was great one of the best storys yet.
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Title: YEAH YEAH!
Reviewed By: Aphire On: June 20, 2006 23:45 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A PERFECT SCORE! This is the best one-shot ever! I SO AGREE ***PLEASE*** Make it a full story... You have a great start, and judging from your skills it'll make out to be a great story. Keep up the JUICY (LOL) Work! ~Kisses and Hugs~ Wink*
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Reviewed By: Niffy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2006 19:01 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great job. =) keep up the awesome work!
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Reviewed By: yanna_enoah [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2006 22:09 EDT
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well written...good job.
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Reviewed By: Mirage [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2006 22:03 EDT
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ahh! you described inuyasha's disrobing so vividly! yea, i read a lemon, i get caught up in the details... i'm weird like that. very nice job. i'm impressed.
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Reviewed By: Cochrann [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2006 02:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome!! Just perfect!! Though I do agree with the other reviewer it would be neat if this were the start of a full-out story or at least another long oneshot about them raising their kids...just a thought.
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Title: frani1375
Reviewed By: frani1375 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2006 23:55 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was so good, could you please, please, please make it into a full-blown fic??? I love your writting and would love to see what would happen next!!
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