Reviewed By: Inu-Kag15 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2006 07:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love ths story idea, I'm waiting for the update. But I'd advise you to go back and reread the chapter, there are loads of mistakes and it makes the story a bit too choppy.
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