| "Cereal Box Romance" Reviews/Comments [ 176 ] |
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Reviewed By: docbevculver [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2007 14:24 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay, new chapter! Awesome job, once again. Loved reading it and Eeeps! on the cliffy... can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter. Bravo, as always, on a job well done! Can't wait to see the next update! Hopefully soon. ^_^ ~Ang~
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Reviewed By: Marukireicho On: January 14, 2007 14:38 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooh, nice. Normally, I don't read Sess/Kag fics, but I didn't know that it was one until I read the chapter in which you told one of your reviewers that. By then, I was completely enraptured, so I decided to keep reading, just for the hell of it. Oh, and good work on the use of Mokomoko-sama!
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Reviewed By: PitaBread [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2007 22:19 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woo hoo!!! Kagome finally gave Kouga a piece of her mind, InuYasha got Osumari'd up the a-hole, and Sesshy called her his woman! What a great chapter! Now, we know that it has to be Sesshoumaru that saves her, but how? And what the hell is up with snake-woman?! LOL A most pleasurable chapter indeed... I just hope it doesn't take too long to get to the next chappie! (no rush, but hurry up! lol) Long live Sesshy x Kagome!!!!
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Reviewed By: keke [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2006 03:56 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was so excited for this chapter could barely sit still enough to read it! I went through so many emotions...one minute I am laughing out loud the next minute total despair! The elevator scene was so gut wrenching.. I felt so sad for Kouga, even teary a little...very well written... you almost made me wish it worked out for him! I love how you pay attention to little details "…a thin lock of silvery hair slipped over one shoulder..." *sigh* and what they wore at that moment. Ah! Moondoggie (fave word in the chapter) was extra delicious ! I am freaking out over what happens to Kagome at the end of the chapter. That girl could never catch a break...I can't wait for the juicy drama! Great work and hope you had a great holiday!
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Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: carlet [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2006 09:20 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know I've been chomping at the bit for this chapter...I think I might have squealed a little when I saw the update notice in my email! Oooooo the scene with Sesshy...and the trouser snake.... Hot hot hot hot hot. I am so agitated by snake lady. (As I probably should be) Why can't they just let Sesshy and Kaggy be together?..WHY!??! WHY!?!?! Okay... I'm done :P Thank you for the marvelous update and I hope you got what you wanted for Christmas :)
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2006 08:01 EST
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Very good chapter! Lots of good humor going on. I think I am as disturbed as Kagome at the fact that Inuyasha got over Kikyou and became a man-whore. Poor Kouga -- you just have to feel sorry for someone that loyal -- and STUPID. I hope kagome is able to keep Sesshoumaru off-balance for a while. He deserves to have to do a lot of chasing. And what's up with the snake-lady? Can't wait to see what she's up to! Thanks for updating this! I'm really enjoying it! More!
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Reviewed By: 45cats [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2006 06:07 EST
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::snort:: Poor Kouga. I can't help but feel sorry for the guy. He's so idealistic and the business of proposing on stage? I hate when guys do that. It's the opposite of dumping you while you're out in a public place like a restaurant. It's not romantic, it's an act of desperation. I don't know how you managed to make this chapter both funny and angsty at the same time but you did. I loved the je ne sai quois. You're right, it is hot.
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Reviewed By: Dark Avenger [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2006 15:53 EST
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Your story has been nominated at the Feudal Association! The Feudal Association is a group that presents awards to fanfiction and fanart in the InuYasha Fandom several times a year. Our official website can be found here - http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/ And our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs can be found here - http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Voting continues through January 19th-20th, 2006. Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ The Daimyo Owner of the Feudal Association
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Reviewed By: soliary25 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2006 15:42 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am sooooo glad I finally got a chance to read this! Excellent work, as usual! Although it is confirmed that you are EVIL (another cliffy!!!!). More, please!
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Reviewed By: PitaBread [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2006 00:16 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your style of writing! The suspense is so great! I could barely breathe when I was reading the 'meeting' part, after Sesshoumaru and InuYasha realized what was going on. Literally, I was gasping for air... This just gets better and better! Can't wait for the next chapter. Great job, keep it up! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Lil_lo [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2006 14:14 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am overdue on reviewing since this is such a great fic! The Inupapa/Izoyai part alone was enough to breathe new life into the 3rd movie (& keep it off Ebay), but the way you've turned Sess into a lech and still kept him in glorious character is amazing. I can't explain how well you write your characters beyond the show and still keep them as their selves. I also wanted to die from laughing when everyone finally found out about Kouga and Kagome (I knew it was going to be worth the wait). I'm still trying to figure out if the snake youkai had some thing for Sess, because she seems to attack Kagome in the past and the future, and you mentioned that she flirted with Sess. Either way, I hope you are inspired to update soon. Congrats on your awards.
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Reviewed By: mrskcgoodman [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2006 13:18 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As much as i love Kouga, he is such a pain in the butt. I hope that Ayame there waiting to kick his butt.
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Title: Hn.
Reviewed By: This Sesshoumaru On: December 04, 2006 14:21 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your characterization of this Sesshoumaru is excellant. :Scoffs: The wolf must be acquainted with pain for touching that which is mine. If you could acquiesce this request I'm certain we could come to some sort of ...agreement? :Raises a thin black suggestive eyebrow into his hair line: You are a fine author.....for a human.
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Reviewed By: 45cats [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2006 12:39 EST
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This chapter is very good. I don't recall ever reading a fanfic wherein Kagome's virginity was not held as some sacred quality of not only her physical body but her spiritualty as well. I think it's very good that you made it clear that her virginity is not what defines her. That's very astute on your part.I hope you realize that. Also, the way you brought up that Kouga was deliberate about getting her drunk was well done. It's clear that he's not malicious about it, just short-sighted and is consistent with his character. I had forgotten that Kouga, although not a real deep thinker can be quite shrewd when he wants something, but doesn't see much beyond that point. Yet another thing I liked was how pragmatic Sesshoumaru was about Kagome losing her virginity to Kouga. Tactically, it's not that much of an impediment and I think that too is consistent with his character. Your point of view is refreshing and I look forward to the next chapter. I wonder how they will all react when confronted with the consequences of the stupid bet and realize how hurtful and destructive it was. It was also great fun for them all at the time and not intended to be cruel. So...what will happen next?
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Title: Sweet
Reviewed By: fireofinuyashas [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2006 20:02 EST
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You've got skillz, my friend. I can only say that I am VERY much looking forward to the next chapter.
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