| "Cereal Box Romance" Reviews/Comments [ 176 ] |
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Title: Fits
Reviewed By: YoukaiFate [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2006 19:51 CST
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Oh, gods in all heaven, I'm wiping the tears out of my eyes while typing this out. You have just received the A1 award for best mental picture of all time..."experimenting with Kaede's pottery". Oh Lord that gave me fits. HAHAHAHAHAHA! Fate
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Title: Excellent
Reviewed By: YoukaiFate [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2006 19:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I laughed so hard over that "Jerk." line that woke Shippo up, asking sleepily, "Inuyasha?" in chapter 4 that I almost fell off my chair. This story is wonderful! I'm completely caught up in it, and I thought I was done with Kag/Sess stories, having seen so many. You've made the pairing fresh with a unique twist, and Kagome is spot-on without being a complete bubble-head. Eager for more, Fate
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Reviewed By: keke [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2006 03:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was dreading reading this chapter just by knowing the title. I have never felt this uncomfortable reading a story before yet I couldn't stop. The way you put every word together captures the spirit of this chapter perfectly. I loved reading the part about Sesshoumaru… not just because it was about him… that section especially stood out to me because the writing was excellent and well thought out, I just love how you portrayed the character. I feel so sad for all the characters… even for Kouga. This chapter established the characters becoming multi-dimensional. I can understand what happened to Kagome and her reaction is believable. Great twist even though it was totally horrifying to read. You always keep us wanting more. I have absolutely no idea what will happen next. Please promise you won't forget about this story and disappear.
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Reviewed By: brainshake [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2006 12:31 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You must must must update soon! *brings out the whip* This is my favorite quote: "Where were the glorious battles and the stench of blood and victory? Honestly, his master's staff of one head got more action than his Staff of Two Heads. The indignity of it all!" XD
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Reviewed By: White Luna [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2006 17:58 CST
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I swear I won't kill you, but not faaaiiir!!!! Anyway, yeah, I understand those nights... those nights are evil
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Title: Ch. 12
Reviewed By: docbevculver [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2006 08:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not gonna kill ya... lol. That was a great chapter and can't wait to see what happens in the next and how she's gonna deal with the 'Kouga's woman' part and all. Awesome job as always! Bravo! Hope to see an update soon! :D
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Reviewed By: mrskcgoodman [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2006 17:37 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That slimy Kouga. As much as I love his gruff voice and maybe even his sexy body he is SOOO wrong. He knows she didn't want him but NOOO he just had to didn't he. I hope Sesshoumaru or Inuyasha don't rip his head clean off his body.
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Reviewed By: toyas_gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2006 22:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmm kouga, kagome and alcohol. strangely im not all that surprised. excellent chapter, im wondering how sesshy and inuyasha are going to take it when they find out.... is that in the next chapter? lol
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Reviewed By: Cochrann [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2006 21:30 CST
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well...that was certainly realistic...I can't wait to see what Sesshoumaru's reaction!
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Title: wow-Chapter 12
Reviewed By: 45cats [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2006 19:23 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I agree with carlet. I thought this chapter was loaded with depth. In my somewhat checkered past, it's possible I've found myself in similar situation(s). The first time is rarely the best time-at least that's what I tell myself-and I think you depicted a possible scenario with a great deal of accuracy. Ouch, in fact. My heart just breaks for Kagome. I think it was very gutsy of you to write this.
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Title: Chapter 12
Reviewed By: carlet [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2006 18:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
woot! Awesome chapter! I absolutely loved it! I'm telling you...these characters have so much depth and body..and actual issues to sort out...it really makes the story come to life. Pwor Kagome! First times have a tendency to suck :(...Should be interesting to see what happens next..for once...I haven't got a clue!
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Reviewed By: QuantumTheory [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2006 14:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't wait to read this latest chapter but the third paragraft is missing. Just thought you should know. I love the story though.
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Reviewed By: playing with demons [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2006 14:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am enjoying this story but it was a little difficult to read past all the inserted 'author id' blurbs. I'm assuming that is just a media miner glitch ;) When the well was blown up it seemed like it happened out of the 'blue' and was a little confusing. The small paragraph about rin's death and now kagome's 'mating' with kouga all just seemed to fly past and is contrary to the more even pace of your earlier chapters. Is that just because of the shift in the future/past tense you were writing in? Anyways, I love your work. You are quite talented!! :)
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Title: Great Update
Reviewed By: ashtheflash On: November 12, 2006 13:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Uh oh, I know Kagome wont stay with Kouga. What's going to happen next?
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Title: Ch. 11
Reviewed By: docbevculver [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2006 13:15 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again, an awesome chapter. I'm truly enjoying this little story and love to see updates in my email for it. Bravo, as always on a awesome job! Can't wait to see what unfolds in the next chapter. :D ~Ang~
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