| "Cereal Box Romance" Reviews/Comments [ 176 ] |
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Reviewed By: PitaBread [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2006 23:16 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your style of writing! The suspense is so great! I could barely breathe when I was reading the 'meeting' part, after Sesshoumaru and InuYasha realized what was going on. Literally, I was gasping for air... This just gets better and better! Can't wait for the next chapter. Great job, keep it up! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Lil_lo [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2006 13:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am overdue on reviewing since this is such a great fic! The Inupapa/Izoyai part alone was enough to breathe new life into the 3rd movie (& keep it off Ebay), but the way you've turned Sess into a lech and still kept him in glorious character is amazing. I can't explain how well you write your characters beyond the show and still keep them as their selves. I also wanted to die from laughing when everyone finally found out about Kouga and Kagome (I knew it was going to be worth the wait). I'm still trying to figure out if the snake youkai had some thing for Sess, because she seems to attack Kagome in the past and the future, and you mentioned that she flirted with Sess. Either way, I hope you are inspired to update soon. Congrats on your awards.
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Reviewed By: mrskcgoodman [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2006 12:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As much as i love Kouga, he is such a pain in the butt. I hope that Ayame there waiting to kick his butt.
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Title: Hn.
Reviewed By: This Sesshoumaru On: December 04, 2006 13:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your characterization of this Sesshoumaru is excellant. :Scoffs: The wolf must be acquainted with pain for touching that which is mine. If you could acquiesce this request I'm certain we could come to some sort of ...agreement? :Raises a thin black suggestive eyebrow into his hair line: You are a fine author.....for a human.
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Reviewed By: 45cats [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2006 11:39 CST
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This chapter is very good. I don't recall ever reading a fanfic wherein Kagome's virginity was not held as some sacred quality of not only her physical body but her spiritualty as well. I think it's very good that you made it clear that her virginity is not what defines her. That's very astute on your part.I hope you realize that. Also, the way you brought up that Kouga was deliberate about getting her drunk was well done. It's clear that he's not malicious about it, just short-sighted and is consistent with his character. I had forgotten that Kouga, although not a real deep thinker can be quite shrewd when he wants something, but doesn't see much beyond that point. Yet another thing I liked was how pragmatic Sesshoumaru was about Kagome losing her virginity to Kouga. Tactically, it's not that much of an impediment and I think that too is consistent with his character. Your point of view is refreshing and I look forward to the next chapter. I wonder how they will all react when confronted with the consequences of the stupid bet and realize how hurtful and destructive it was. It was also great fun for them all at the time and not intended to be cruel. So...what will happen next?
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Title: Sweet
Reviewed By: fireofinuyashas [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2006 19:02 CST
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You've got skillz, my friend. I can only say that I am VERY much looking forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: keke [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2006 03:12 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! This is the most suspense I have ever felt… I have to know who came out of the elevator! Is it Sesshoumaru… I really hope it is him. I can't imagine what will happen next… I have no idea how you decide the results… I love the new characters, especially Hoshi, he's spicy ^^ Poor Kouga. He has no chance competing with Sesshoumaru… or does he… Congrats on the wins, you deserve it! Now write another fic so that I have something to nominate…:p
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Title: ~Wolf~
Reviewed By: carlet [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2006 20:13 CST
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I loved it with the intensity of Sesshoumaru's gaze (after you asked him for a quick snuggle) On a side note...dude..you got threatened with bazookage.... >.> Fan fic is dangerous O.o
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Reviewed By: tsnc327 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2006 12:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the story. The idea is original, the characters aren't OOC, and the plot flows nicely. Very well written. I can't wait until the next update!
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Reviewed By: docbevculver [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2006 11:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay a new chapter! Once again, awesome job! Loved reading it and loved all the interactions between everyone. Can't wait to see how the next unfolds. Hope to see another update soon! Bravo!
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Reviewed By: brainshake [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2006 10:40 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GAH! Hurry up and continue! *threatens with bazooka* NOW!
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Reviewed By: golden_kitsune (too lazy to sign into her account) On: December 02, 2006 03:20 CST
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I like Lord Hoshi, he makes me laugh...but anyway. Please update soon, there's so much to happen!
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Title: zomg...
Reviewed By: PitaBread [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2006 02:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't even express how much I'm enjoying this. And these last couple o' chapters? So great. You are definately correct about alcohol doing strange things to you, so it's totally believable. I can't wait until Sesshoumaru finds her... and smells that she's been with Kouga! That is gonna be some drama-fo-yo-mama!!!! Can't wait! And good luck with the moving and stuff... it's a pain.
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Title: LOL
Reviewed By: PitaBread [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2006 22:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great so far! Original! Of course, it's not canon, being that Kikyou is dead, but I guess the story wouldn't work without Kikyou around, would it? Really great. Keep up the good work!
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Title: New Lover
Reviewed By: fireofinuyashas [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2006 23:21 CST
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Holy 'mole. Well, I discovered this fic when it just had its first few chapters and thought it was hilarious. Now I'm rereading the beginning and reading the end because one of my peers has alerted me to this fantastic piece of work. Now, as for my final thought on the new chapters, refer to sentence one. I'm interested to see how you dig Kagome out of that gaping chasm. Looking forward to the next chapter, and hope you've had a happy holiday, Marsoutcast
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