| "Cereal Box Romance" Reviews/Comments [ 176 ] |
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Title: Hn.
Reviewed By: This Sesshoumaru On: December 04, 2006 14:21 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your characterization of this Sesshoumaru is excellant. :Scoffs: The wolf must be acquainted with pain for touching that which is mine. If you could acquiesce this request I'm certain we could come to some sort of ...agreement? :Raises a thin black suggestive eyebrow into his hair line: You are a fine author.....for a human.
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Reviewed By: 45cats [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2006 12:39 EST
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This chapter is very good. I don't recall ever reading a fanfic wherein Kagome's virginity was not held as some sacred quality of not only her physical body but her spiritualty as well. I think it's very good that you made it clear that her virginity is not what defines her. That's very astute on your part.I hope you realize that. Also, the way you brought up that Kouga was deliberate about getting her drunk was well done. It's clear that he's not malicious about it, just short-sighted and is consistent with his character. I had forgotten that Kouga, although not a real deep thinker can be quite shrewd when he wants something, but doesn't see much beyond that point. Yet another thing I liked was how pragmatic Sesshoumaru was about Kagome losing her virginity to Kouga. Tactically, it's not that much of an impediment and I think that too is consistent with his character. Your point of view is refreshing and I look forward to the next chapter. I wonder how they will all react when confronted with the consequences of the stupid bet and realize how hurtful and destructive it was. It was also great fun for them all at the time and not intended to be cruel. So...what will happen next?
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Title: Sweet
Reviewed By: fireofinuyashas [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2006 20:02 EST
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You've got skillz, my friend. I can only say that I am VERY much looking forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: keke [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2006 04:12 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! This is the most suspense I have ever felt… I have to know who came out of the elevator! Is it Sesshoumaru… I really hope it is him. I can't imagine what will happen next… I have no idea how you decide the results… I love the new characters, especially Hoshi, he's spicy ^^ Poor Kouga. He has no chance competing with Sesshoumaru… or does he… Congrats on the wins, you deserve it! Now write another fic so that I have something to nominate…:p
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Title: ~Wolf~
Reviewed By: carlet [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2006 21:13 EST
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I loved it with the intensity of Sesshoumaru's gaze (after you asked him for a quick snuggle) On a side note...dude..you got threatened with bazookage.... >.> Fan fic is dangerous O.o
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Reviewed By: tsnc327 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2006 13:57 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the story. The idea is original, the characters aren't OOC, and the plot flows nicely. Very well written. I can't wait until the next update!
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Reviewed By: docbevculver [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2006 12:51 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay a new chapter! Once again, awesome job! Loved reading it and loved all the interactions between everyone. Can't wait to see how the next unfolds. Hope to see another update soon! Bravo!
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Reviewed By: brainshake [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2006 11:40 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GAH! Hurry up and continue! *threatens with bazooka* NOW!
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Reviewed By: golden_kitsune (too lazy to sign into her account) On: December 02, 2006 04:20 EST
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I like Lord Hoshi, he makes me laugh...but anyway. Please update soon, there's so much to happen!
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Title: zomg...
Reviewed By: PitaBread [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2006 03:24 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't even express how much I'm enjoying this. And these last couple o' chapters? So great. You are definately correct about alcohol doing strange things to you, so it's totally believable. I can't wait until Sesshoumaru finds her... and smells that she's been with Kouga! That is gonna be some drama-fo-yo-mama!!!! Can't wait! And good luck with the moving and stuff... it's a pain.
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Title: LOL
Reviewed By: PitaBread [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2006 23:12 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great so far! Original! Of course, it's not canon, being that Kikyou is dead, but I guess the story wouldn't work without Kikyou around, would it? Really great. Keep up the good work!
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Title: New Lover
Reviewed By: fireofinuyashas [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2006 00:21 EST
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Holy 'mole. Well, I discovered this fic when it just had its first few chapters and thought it was hilarious. Now I'm rereading the beginning and reading the end because one of my peers has alerted me to this fantastic piece of work. Now, as for my final thought on the new chapters, refer to sentence one. I'm interested to see how you dig Kagome out of that gaping chasm. Looking forward to the next chapter, and hope you've had a happy holiday, Marsoutcast
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Title: Fits
Reviewed By: YoukaiFate [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2006 20:51 EST
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Oh, gods in all heaven, I'm wiping the tears out of my eyes while typing this out. You have just received the A1 award for best mental picture of all time..."experimenting with Kaede's pottery". Oh Lord that gave me fits. HAHAHAHAHAHA! Fate
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Title: Excellent
Reviewed By: YoukaiFate [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2006 20:19 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I laughed so hard over that "Jerk." line that woke Shippo up, asking sleepily, "Inuyasha?" in chapter 4 that I almost fell off my chair. This story is wonderful! I'm completely caught up in it, and I thought I was done with Kag/Sess stories, having seen so many. You've made the pairing fresh with a unique twist, and Kagome is spot-on without being a complete bubble-head. Eager for more, Fate
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Reviewed By: keke [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2006 04:02 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was dreading reading this chapter just by knowing the title. I have never felt this uncomfortable reading a story before yet I couldn't stop. The way you put every word together captures the spirit of this chapter perfectly. I loved reading the part about Sesshoumaru… not just because it was about him… that section especially stood out to me because the writing was excellent and well thought out, I just love how you portrayed the character. I feel so sad for all the characters… even for Kouga. This chapter established the characters becoming multi-dimensional. I can understand what happened to Kagome and her reaction is believable. Great twist even though it was totally horrifying to read. You always keep us wanting more. I have absolutely no idea what will happen next. Please promise you won't forget about this story and disappear.
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