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Reviewed By: Daniel Rodriguez [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2009 06:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^^ Yeah, baby!! This was very good! It seems that Yuugi can duel with the best of them, even if he's injured to the point of death. Congrats to him! This chapter was really thought out. Excellent work! Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Daniel Rodriguez [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2008 10:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
0_0 Whoa... wasn't expecting this... this story has all kinds of twists and turns! Now that Yuugi has gone off the deep end, so to speak, it seems that things are only going to get worse for the group from here on in. Hope to see some true light coming into the heroes soon! Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Daniel Rodriguez [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2008 04:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^^ Quick update! I like it! Jou did well against Ryuzaki, and it shows here. Good sportsmanship as well, which is really rare in the series itself. Congrats to Jou! It seems that your fanfic is admired by many all over the world, as it should. I hope you gain more readers and reviewers through it. In any case, hope to see more of this soon! Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Daniel Rodriguez [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2008 20:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn! Seto is in trouble now! But just for the record, Love does not make a person weak. It is a double-edge sword, which can be used for both good and bad. The good use Love as an emotion to make them stronger, Evil uses Love as a strangle-hold. I hope that something or someone frees them, and also that Mai and Seto continue to have their relationship. Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: darkokita [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2008 22:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm having fun with this fic but find myself constantly back-tracking due to the grammar and spelling problems. I would have expected someone who is acquainted with the works of Poe and Donne to be a little better at writing. None-the-less, good fun watching Jou and Seto getting on each other's nerves. Looking forward to the unveiling of the mystery villian as well.
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Reviewed By: Daniel Rodriguez [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2008 08:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
0_0 Whoa... this was tight!! Yuugi showed honor and strength when he buried Ari with his deck, using his own sleeping bag as a coffin of sort. Shows that even though he's on his own, he has honor and dignity of warrior of old. As for him and Serenity getting it on, sweet!! ^^ Though, if Anzu finds out, I suspect a great big catfight to be starting up soon. Money is on Anzu, since she has something more to prove to her former beloved. The dueling was right on, and with Yuugi taking out Haga with a single hit and destroying the syringe... excellent! He could have used the poison on Haga, but didn't. It shows he is not the type to look for revenge and sinking to other's levels. He has changed, but I say for the better. This was awesome!! Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: tinkle time kelly [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2008 12:45 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Neat update. Now lets see more of Yugi, please.
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Reviewed By: Daniel Rodriguez [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2008 20:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
0_0 Mai and Kaiba?! And also Honda has Gym Leader?! I have to say, when you pull off surprises, you do it in a spectacular way! I did not know that Honda was Sir Gawain(?), nor that he had AND used effectively rare and powerful cards. Things are looking up for the blonde and billioniare, and I hope things are going well for Yuugi as well. I have to say, this story is turning out to be a surprising, kick ass fanfic! I will try to gather more reviewers for you, bro. Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: tinkle time kelly [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2008 09:07 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Neat update! This fic is surprisingly good. And quick updates makes it even more enjoyable. Thanks for writing. Later.
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Reviewed By: tinkle time kelly [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2008 07:02 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Umm Is there more? Well done so far.
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Reviewed By: Daniel Rodriguez [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2008 21:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for the update! Things are really getting interesting, especially now that Jou and Anzu are on their own. I hope that things get more intense, and also well for Yugi and his loyal friends. Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Blackswipe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2007 16:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I like your fic, i have to admit i was never been a big fan of Yugi x tea cuppleing but i like this one. I wounder if Yami very vengeful of Yugi right now. Any how love the fie hope you continue.
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Reviewed By: Daniel Rodriguez [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2007 23:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, this kicked some serious ass!! Thanks for the update! Yuugi did well against his opponent, same with Jou. I have to say, you really know how to write duels. Heh, the surprises were to see Jou actually winning like he did against a stronger opponent and Yuugi winning a badge indirectly. Anzu and Yuugi really need to clear the air between them, otherwise this merry-go-round of emotions is going to drive them, and the others around them crazy! The little confrontation between Anzu and Kaiba, sheer gold! Thank you!! Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Daniel Rodriguez [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2007 23:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I got to admit, this was very good. I hope to see more in the future, Phoenix. Mai flirting with Yuugi, said Duelist is confused between himself and the girls, Jou getting knocked around senseless, Seto being his snarky self, and Anzu also confused about her relationship with Yuugi. Kick ass, all the way! Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Daniel Rodriguez [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2006 20:28 CDT
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It would appear that powers are appearing, and a dark force once again looms on the horizon. Nick and Yugi were in their element, and the girls were also kick-ass as well! Thank you for updating. Keep it up!
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