| "The commitment to Commitment" Reviews/Comments [ 36 ] |
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Reviewed By: Watch For Stars* On: June 15, 2006 17:03 CDT
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I like editing stuff. lol I just wish I could've gotten this done sooner...Busy bees and all that...lol Summer vaca! WHOO! lol SonAmyness and Crailsness and Knuxougeness is AWESOME! Heh. I wonder what everyone's reaction will be...But it was inviteable after all. Everyone knows it's SonAmy 4eva! lol
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Reviewed By: Dark side of ULF 101 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2006 21:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very good fic so far. i can't wait till the next chapter!
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Title: oookaaay....
Reviewed By: Watch For Stars* On: June 10, 2006 15:45 CDT
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So you let Amy get her hands on ch 4 huh? lol She now pwns ur soul, FYI... lol You poor boi...lol Beware the Amy...BEWARE! Well, I liked this ch before, but I gotta say that Shadow's more IC in the edited version. So, update soon! BYEZ! ~_^
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Title: SWEET YOU GUYS ARE THE BEST
Reviewed By: DIPLOMATIC_FOX [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2006 15:32 CDT
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YEP SHADOW NEEDS LUV TOO BUT THIS IS KICKS ASS!!
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Reviewed By: luv shadow 14* On: June 09, 2006 22:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i must say, i edited this better than i planned it's still a little touchy, but at least it's better than before... lol ok, i'm gonna go back to my book somone's trying to kill the hardy boys! nooooooo lol ~luv shadow 14~ ;)
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Title: LOL
Reviewed By: lUV sHADOW 14* i KNOW... IT'S COOL On: June 09, 2006 20:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
OK... WHY DID I GIVE IT AN 7, YOU MIGHT ASK? I'LL TELL YOU WHY. AS MUCH AS I LIKE THIS STORY AND WORKING ON IT WITH YOU, I FIND SOME FLAW IN THIS PARTICULAR CHAPTER. FIRST: SHADOW (EVEN THOUGH I KNOW I HAVE MADE THIS MISTAKE, I'VE LEARNED FROM EXPERIENCE) DOESN'T LOVE ON FIRST SIGHT, WHEREAS, TAKE AMY FOR EXAMPLE. SHE LOVED SONIC THE FIRST TIME SHE SAW HIM. SECOND: FILONA JUST POPS UP OUT OF NOWHERE AND TRIES TO KILL SHADOW FOR NO APPARENT REASON. DUDE, YA GOTTA HAVE A MOTIVE. IT'S CRUCIAL TO HAVE A MOTIVE FOR KILLING SOMEONE. YOU DON'T JUST WAKE UP ONE DAY AND SAY "OH, I FEEL LIKE KILLING SOMEONE BECAUSE I FEEL LIKE IT." IT DOESN'T WORK THAT WAY. IT MAY SEEM LIKE I'M OVERLY CRITICAL, BUT IT'S FOR YOUR OWN GOOD AND TALENT THAT I DO THIS, SO BEAR WITH ME. THIRD: SHADOW DOESN'T REALLY HAVE A HORRIBLY, "OH MY GOSH I THINK I'M IN LOVE WITH THIS STRANGER" PERSONA. HE'S MORE THE TYPE THAT HATES A PERSON RIGHT WHEN HE SEES THEM, AND THEN MAYBE, MAYBE WILL GROW TO LIKE THEM DOWN THE LINE. LOVE, HELL, LIKE, DOESN'T HAPPEN WITH SHADOW UPON FIRST GLANCE. TRUST ME, I KNOW. AND ANOTHER THING, TRY TO MAKE SHADOW JUST A TAD BIT MORE SHADOW. YOU DID A BETTER JOB THIS CHAPTER, BUT I'M STILL NOT BUYING HIS CHARACTER SO MUCH. IT'S HARD FOR ME TO LOOK AT HIM IN THIS CHAPTER AND ACTUALLY BELIEVE THAT HE'S SHADOW, YA KNOW? OTHER THAN THAT, I'D SAY YOU'VE DONE A FAIRLY DECENT JOB ON THIS STORY SO FAR. IT'S COMING ALONG NICELY. KEEP UP THE WORK. ~LUV SHADOW 14~ ;)
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Title: LOL
Reviewed By: lUV sHADOW 14* On: June 09, 2006 20:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OK, I KNOW I WROTE THIS CHAPTER, BUT I STILL THINK IT COULD'VE USED A LITTLE MORE TUNING UP... DUDE... PARENTS... YEESH... *ROLLS EYES* WELL, YOU WON'T BE SEEING MUCH OF ME TOMORROW... I START UP BOWLING AND I GOT MY PERMIT, SO I'LL BE OUT "LEARNING" HOW TO DRIVE... LOL IT'S REALLY FUN, BUT DANGEROUS... BUT, THIS STORY IS GOOD ALL THE SAME (EXCEPT FOR DAMN PARENTS ALWAYS EDITING OUT THE GOOD STUFF...) WELL, ON TO READ CHAPTER 4... ~LUV SHADOW 14~ ;)
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Reviewed By: Watch For Stars* On: June 09, 2006 19:13 CDT
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0.o Dude, why the hell would Fin be trying to KILL Shadow? WTF was up with that, dude? Guess I'll find out in future chs... Update soon! BYEZ! ~_^
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Title: It's me!
Reviewed By: Tails_Worship14 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2006 14:11 CDT
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As you may know, Shadow's girlfriend is not in this chapter. I'm always changing what I'm writing. lol Anyway, I'll be adding the fourth chapter today. And it is all about Shadow meeting his soon to be gf. Until then, see ya. By the way, please review!
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Reviewed By: Watch For Stars* On: June 09, 2006 13:52 CDT
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Cute is all I can think of...lol Keep it up. Oh, and there was no mention of Shadow's gf in this one...
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Title: to i.am.someone
Reviewed By: Tails_Worship14 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2006 14:49 CDT
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its almost ready, and you guessed right. ps Shadow gets a gf in this chapter. im havin Luv Shadow 14 do this chapter
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Title: updating is your friend
Reviewed By: i.am.someone On: June 06, 2006 14:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Updating is your friend so can u update this story soon plz coz its good so far and coz i really want to see what happens to everyone when the boys sleep with the girls lol
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Title: to cut the crap
Reviewed By: Tails_Worship On: June 05, 2006 17:53 CDT
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I am workin with Watch For Stars for an OC, and shell be in the story soon
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Title: cut the crap guys (just kiddign you know i luv u i think
Reviewed By: DIPLOMATIC_FOX [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2006 16:48 CDT
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its kick ass of course if you need an OC just ask and i will "lend" ya one of mine don't matter boy/girl just ask so shadow wont be loney...
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Reviewed By: i.am.someone On: June 05, 2006 14:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great my favorite pair of love birds are Tails and Cream. 10/10 keep it up
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