| "The commitment to Commitment" Reviews/Comments [ 36 ] |
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Title: LOL
Reviewed By: lUV sHADOW 14* On: June 09, 2006 20:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OK, I KNOW I WROTE THIS CHAPTER, BUT I STILL THINK IT COULD'VE USED A LITTLE MORE TUNING UP... DUDE... PARENTS... YEESH... *ROLLS EYES* WELL, YOU WON'T BE SEEING MUCH OF ME TOMORROW... I START UP BOWLING AND I GOT MY PERMIT, SO I'LL BE OUT "LEARNING" HOW TO DRIVE... LOL IT'S REALLY FUN, BUT DANGEROUS... BUT, THIS STORY IS GOOD ALL THE SAME (EXCEPT FOR DAMN PARENTS ALWAYS EDITING OUT THE GOOD STUFF...) WELL, ON TO READ CHAPTER 4... ~LUV SHADOW 14~ ;)
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Reviewed By: Watch For Stars* On: June 09, 2006 19:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
0.o Dude, why the hell would Fin be trying to KILL Shadow? WTF was up with that, dude? Guess I'll find out in future chs... Update soon! BYEZ! ~_^
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Title: It's me!
Reviewed By: Tails_Worship14 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2006 14:11 CDT
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As you may know, Shadow's girlfriend is not in this chapter. I'm always changing what I'm writing. lol Anyway, I'll be adding the fourth chapter today. And it is all about Shadow meeting his soon to be gf. Until then, see ya. By the way, please review!
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Reviewed By: Watch For Stars* On: June 09, 2006 13:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
Cute is all I can think of...lol Keep it up. Oh, and there was no mention of Shadow's gf in this one...
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Title: to i.am.someone
Reviewed By: Tails_Worship14 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2006 14:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
its almost ready, and you guessed right. ps Shadow gets a gf in this chapter. im havin Luv Shadow 14 do this chapter
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Title: updating is your friend
Reviewed By: i.am.someone On: June 06, 2006 14:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Updating is your friend so can u update this story soon plz coz its good so far and coz i really want to see what happens to everyone when the boys sleep with the girls lol
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Title: to cut the crap
Reviewed By: Tails_Worship On: June 05, 2006 17:53 CDT
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I am workin with Watch For Stars for an OC, and shell be in the story soon
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Title: cut the crap guys (just kiddign you know i luv u i think
Reviewed By: DIPLOMATIC_FOX [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2006 16:48 CDT
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its kick ass of course if you need an OC just ask and i will "lend" ya one of mine don't matter boy/girl just ask so shadow wont be loney...
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Reviewed By: i.am.someone On: June 05, 2006 14:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great my favorite pair of love birds are Tails and Cream. 10/10 keep it up
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Reviewed By: Watch For Stars [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2006 09:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol Poor Shadow... lol The # of guys outnumber the girls... That's so...gay! lol Ah well. Once again, this is a cute ch! lol Crails fluffiness and SonAmyness! lol I like how Amy found out about Sonic's feelings. I can so see his face! lol Knuxouge, Crails, and SonAmy are my fav couples! Yayz! lol Keep up the good work! Byez! ~_^
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Title: now you have attained a level of perfection
Reviewed By: the one who knows emeralds On: June 04, 2006 23:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you have creils and shadow is screwed! congratulations you are now on the perfection list
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Title: THIS IS OSM!!!!!
Reviewed By: Luv Shadow 14 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2006 22:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DUDE! THIS IS OSM! OSM = AWESOME, BY THE WAY. LOL MY WORD... THIS IS A GREAT STORY, AND I'LL BE HONORED TO WRITE CHAPTER 3 FOR YOU. YOU'LL JUST HAFTA TELL ME WHAT YOU WANT TO HAPPEN AND I'LL BE RIGHT ON IT, PROLLY TOMORROW, SEEING AS HOW I'LL HAVE A WHOLE DAY TO PERFECT IT. LOL BUT, IT'S SUNDAY AT 11:30 AT NIGHT RIGHT NOW... IT FELT LATER THAN THAT... OH WELL... I LOVE THE FLUFF! THE CREAM/TAILS... OMG! WHEN I READ GOOD FLUFF, MY LUNGS OR HEART OR SOMEWHERE IN THAT AREA, FEEL LIKE IT'S GONNA EXPLODE, AND THIS, MY FRIEND, IS GREAT FLUFF! YEAH, I'M WEIRD, BUT I'M ALSO PROLLY THE UN-GIRLIEST GIRL YOU'LL EVER MEET... LOL ANYWAY, THIS IS A GREAT STORY. AND NO NEED IN TELLING YOU TO UPDATE, SEEING AS HOW I'LL BE THE ONE WRITING THE NEXT CHAPTER... LOL WELL, AGAIN, THIS IS GREAT! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! ~LUV SHADOW 14~ ;)
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Title: Logging in's for chumps! ...who aren't lazy like me! ~_^
Reviewed By: Watch For Stars* On: June 04, 2006 21:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh wow! I'm so honored that you think me, Josh, and Amy are such good writers! I luv you already! ^_^ lol So far I think that this is really cute! Knuxouge 4EVA!!!!! World's biggest fan right here! *points at self* lol Some may try to dispute that claim, but it is a lie! A LIE I SAY! lol Yeah, I'm rather hyper right now... Heh. ^_^;; Ah well... Real glad that Amy linked me to this story! I'll hafta log in and actually add it to my favs and stuff! lol Hey, if you have AIM you should IM me sometime! Or e-mail! Oh, I also have Yahoo! IM. But that's it! lol Seriously, e-mail me! writesandreads@aol.com As for an actual review of this story... Having the Master Emerald be the ring was smart! lol Talk about gaudy, ya know? lol But I can see her showing it off to everybody! lol Tails is a lil genius! It's great that he was able to make the gem so lightweight! lol So, I'm hyper right now! And very honored that you'd think of me and 2 of my greatest friends as such good writers! Hope you've enjoyed our stories and continued to do so! Looking forward to an e-mail from you! BYEZ! ~_^
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Title: NOT SIGNING IN...
Reviewed By: LUV SHADOW 14* On: June 04, 2006 21:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEY! I GOT YOUR REVIEW FOR MY COMMERCIALS! THANKS! DUDE! I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!! LOL THAT WAS A GREAT STORY SO FAR! YOU GOTTA UPDATE! I WILL BE SURE TO PUT IT ON MY FAVORITES! -_^ DUDE, THIS IS GREAT! YOU SHOULD TOTALLY IM ME SOME TIME (DO YOU HAVE AIM OR AOL?) WELL, YOU CAN ALWAYS E-MAIL... AMYCOOLZ1991@AOL.COM OR YAHOO.COM EITHER ONE... DUDE... ~LUV SHADOW 14~ ;)
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Title: very good!
Reviewed By: the one who knows emeralds On: June 04, 2006 16:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like it very much! it is very good! though as you stated not as good as those three or (yes there is two more in there class) fairy girl or the gand master writer of tem all the one they call kattx! but it is very good!
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