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| "A Song for a Snake Charmer's Pipe" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: yugioh lover On: July 23, 2007 15:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow. that was pretty good. i thought it was a bit strange at first how ryou never said anything... at all. but after i got the hang of it, it was great and the fact that he never said anything really made the story better. nice work!
| Reviewed By: nummy_cream_puff [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2007 22:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh...my...lord. I don't know why you don't have a million comments on this story already. Honestly, I feel like crying after reading this story. Just, the entire essence of it, the thoughts behind it and just how eloquently you told this tale strikes me deep in my core. I haven't felt this moved over a story in a very long time, and though this may be only one comment, I am trying to express my sudden and deep love for this story as well as I can in my own words. Truly though, I--I am rather speechless. I can't properly describe how amazing I believe this story is. I really hope you plan on continuing your writing, or the entire writing world and all those who read will be missing out on something amazing. I-I...I must sound like a fool. But really. This story is just...a masterpiece. It was perfectly put together. There is no need for another chapter as this chapter is the entire story within itself. It doesn't drone on and its all put together so perfectly... Alright, I really ought to stop preaching about your story. I just wanted to try and lend some of my own deep feelings, to even partially verbalize my deep...well, love for this story. It is amazing. I must go see if you have written more Ryou/Bakura fanfictions. I do honestly hope so. Take care and keep up with your writing. A new and devoted fan, Sarah
| Reviewed By: Dagora [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2006 16:27 CDT
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I read this fic on ff.n; I loved it then, and I love it now. Your style and ideas are amazing. It's just like Bakura to do that to someone -_-' Keep writing! I'll keep reading. =D --Dagora
| Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2006 17:07 CDT
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Hm, very very interesting. I love it. I read The Woman Warrior for school too; I had to do a research paper on the whole book. But I liked how you twisted that one scene from "A Song for the Barbarian Reed Pipe" to fit Ryou and Bakura. It actually applies really well to them. All in all, it was a good story, I'm gonna add it to my favorites. Cya!
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