| "To Release You to Him" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: Goshibuh [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2009 02:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm not a particular fan of yaoi, but you made it enjoyable to read. And, come on, Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru? Why not read it? They are my two favorite male characters, so that's just natural :]. Overall, I really enjoyed reading this. I tink I skipped over it when I first read it summary because of the fact there's yaoi in it, but I'm glad I came back to it. I think they were mostly all in character, except I can't exactly see Shesshoumaru do that, but you made it believable :D. I guess, somewhere, deep down, Sess is just a big puppy...Kind of ;D Anyway, I'm very happy I got the chance to read this. And I agree with the fact that this one-shot would be great if you made it into a story with multiple chapters, but I'd understand if you just don't see tha happening.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2007 01:14 CDT
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amazing story... really liked it... great work... good job... keep it up...
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Reviewed By: Sassa [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2007 19:28 CDT
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I enjoy all kinds of citrus; lemon, lime and false flavoured strawberries if that's what offered... But I agree with inu hanyou nikkie, it was a little OOC. I don't think that's how the three of them would end up... but on the other hand, concidering it's taken, like, forever for Inuyasha to even touch Kagome without specific reason, if he was to stay IC, he'd die a thousand year old virgin. And of course, some tales are not ment to be brilliant, just entertaining. Or perhaps wettening twix them legs. : )
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Title: Incredible
Reviewed By: 84trillion On: December 06, 2006 01:28 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic was just amazing. The emotions were so powerful, and your InuYasha hit the nail on the head for character believability. Wow.
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Reviewed By: Angel_of_Elements [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2006 18:17 CDT
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Awww...at first I was mad at what InuYasha did and then I was happy that he got to be with her. The Sesshomaru thing was hott.
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Reviewed By: inu hanyou nikkie On: June 10, 2006 10:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed this one shot. It was really great! I found it well written and flowing smoothly. You are talented with your descriptions. The love scenes are pretty awesome as well. Thank you for writing it and sharing it with us... Now I would like to offer up some concerns..I hope these come across as I wish them too.. as some constructive critism. Because in no way do I want it sound like a flame. prephaps include in your summary an OOC warning. There is no way Inuyasha would just up, toss away his quest for Naraku and revenge like a child does with a toy because something else came along. And Sesshoumaru was pretty selfish and was trying to make Inuyasha choose I found until he accpeted the fact Inuyasha loves and needed Kagome. He used a forked tongue to try and turn Inuyasha away from Kagome. And with the one line in your story it seemed for a moment like Sesshoumaru was only having sex with his brother in order to spite and hurt Kagome and win against her. The mention of Kouga's reaction was very bang dead on correct. I believe he would get voilent if Kagome refused him and Inuyasha wasn't around. Thank you for being the one writer who wrote into the story Kagome's powers used in self defense. Usually writers tend to forget this aspect sometimes. So Kudos to you!! Your explainations to having a threesome was really great! I loved how Inuyasha defended Kagome's honour by stating he wouldn't use her like that as a baby machine. So keep up the good work!!
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Title: DAAAMMMMNNNN!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2006 19:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't care about spelling as long as the story is good and has a lot of tension and hotness. Well you've succeed if I could I'd give you 100! Click you've been added to my favorite writers!- B reading U- soon I hope! ^_~
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Reviewed By: Peter Gad On: June 05, 2006 17:17 CDT
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Great story very hot. You should continue it would make one hell of a Story.
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Reviewed By: HanyouKagome962 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2006 16:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow that was HOT and i think you should continue it would make an awsome story.
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Title: Hotness!
Reviewed By: LadyIvy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2006 11:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so incredibly hot! I love the way neither Sesshomaru nor Kagome force Inuyasha to make a choice--both of them understand his need and want for the other. Now Inuyasha has more than enough love *waggles eyebrows* Great one-shot!
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Reviewed By: Dark_Lady_69 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2006 03:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was Very well done...but i think this should continue...it has the makings of a great story
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