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| "MIRROR, MIRROR" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] | Title: Aw . . . *sniff*
Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2007 14:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A fitting end to your universe indeed! It was a wondrous ride, and I thank you for every word of it. Your sense of humor and brilliant and original action sets your writing apart from anyone else's. One technical note: You said Vegeta kept a saltwater tank, yet you listed freshwater fish. Should you ever decide to correct the list, might I suggest the emperor and queen angelfish, regal tang or perhaps a royal gramma? LOL. Thank you again for the wonderful stories. Best wishes for all future endeavors.
| Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2006 07:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
Sorry it took me so long to get around to reading this. I must confess at first I didn't like where it was going. I thought Vegeta was all wrong initially. I should have known there was more to it---it's a DA story after all! I love the fusion after-effect idea and how you've tied it into your B/V universe.
| Title: Excellent!
Reviewed By: Vejitalover [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2006 20:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hooray, what an awesome new addition to your original V/B storyline! You Rock!
| Title: weepee!
Reviewed By: Free-sprit [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2006 05:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
wow, I'm fineally allowed to reveiw.. I couldn't reveiw last time I tried. Ah well. LOVE the story. Love it. Please, please continue...! I have been begging fr something new and good to read, but I can't seem to find anything.. And that's why I love you right now, but only if you continue this wonderful story. Very exciting.
| Title: chap 1
Reviewed By: VenusLegacy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2006 02:24 CDT
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Wow! this story is amazing, my gosh I don't know what to think. At first when I noticed the subtle changes in Vegeta I was shocked and wondered if the incident with Buu hit him really hard as to make him have a new outlook on life, then I thought it was quite comical, the way Bulma would be itching for a fight and all Vegeta responded with was okay, fine. But as I read further I became increasingly disturbed, frightened almost, the ending is especially horrific, I am scared to find out what happens next, yet at the same time I can't wait. This story has already begun as a chilling and exciting journey, I wonder what lies ahead.
| Reviewed By: danteshell [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2006 14:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Darke Angelus? Darke Angelus! Oh my God! You came up with a new story! I've read everything you wrote and I loved them. You're the BEST DBZ author (and TemptingTemptation). I'm really glad to see you're back.
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