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| "A Love's Reflection" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: NERVSGC [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2007 15:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You should write more chapters for this story it is a good story and I would like to read more for this story.
| Reviewed By: Taro MD On: June 06, 2006 20:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
I wasn't ill... I was in a rush because it was the first time that I'd entered a lemon contest and despite me being an amateur, getting 5th place is an achievement.
| Title: Not Bad
Reviewed By: Marine Brother Shran [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2006 22:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm...pretty good. No offence but not exactly one of your best works. It could've been betterly described, and the romance could've been way, way, way better. Granted that there was meant to be some OC in it, but that really threw me off. Overall, it's pretty good. HOwever in terms of the romance factor, it's subpar, even for your standards. All I saw was hentai. There wasn't any real emotions throughout the story. All I could feel was the lust and the various desires to try different things while they had sex. There was nothing that could've constitute romance. And the dialogue, I'm not going to get into it, but it really didn't suit them. I'm sorry if you take offense, but I'm just giving you my opinion. Please don't take this as an insult. But in all honesty, UNLESS, you wrote this while you were sick, this is not one of your best works. Ja ne
| Title: Keep it up
Reviewed By: EVA-09 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2006 15:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, what can I say? This one-shot is a masterpiece compared to my one-shot fanfic. And too bad that this got only the fifth place, but better that then nothing. You can do a good work in my opinion and you should keep it that way. Rei/Shinji fanfics and fans rule and nobody can't do anything about that. Again, keep up the good work. But the ending is just that we don't know what happened after Asuka found out about them.
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