| "Forgotten Love" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2006 10:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
Good chapter. I hope Bakura figures out the mystery soon.
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Title: Reply
Reviewed By: LokiVsAnubis [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2006 19:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't know if it let me sign in but this is Lokivsanubis the authoress of Sprits:Welcome Home. I'll be updating it soon. Wouldn't mind your ideas if you had any. But anyway. It's not unusual for authors or authoresses to ask other to look over their work. I find your very interesting and can't wait to read more. I would love to see Malik, Yugi and Ryou as actors. But the question is what play would they be reinacting? And how is that play important to the story? UPdate soon. can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2006 06:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a really good story. I like it a lot. I hope Bakura finds some answers soon and it doesn't wreck his and Ryou's relationsship.
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