"Nightmares" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: martianbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2010 00:03 CDT Comment/Review: It's good. Write more though because I don't know what to give you advice on besides asking for more material to read. I am curious where you will take this story. I do hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: ruthie balboa On: December 14, 2009 12:40 CST Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: It's interesting and full of questions for the reader. Please write more. I'm intrigued as to what you would write next. It's a good story but it definitely needs to answer a few questions for the reader before it is a satisfying story. I like how you kept the characters mostly in character, especially Hiei. A lot of fanfics love to make Hiei a weak helpless little rutn and I hate that!Also, your spelling and grammar was not distracting with mistakes. Some fics have soo many errors that I don't want to read it because of the number of errors. Please write more! P.S. I do not give 10s, rarely 9s. I think I gave one 9 a couple of months ago. A 8 out of 10 means it is a great story and definitely above average, but its not the best story I have ever read and it still needs more to be more satisfying. Please update soon. The sooner you update, the sooner I will write another review. PLEASE WRITE MORE OF THIS STORY!
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Reviewed By: soulless On: September 24, 2006 05:16 CDT Comment/Review: let me guess, the pairing is yusuke and...i don't know... i pick...koenma! am i right? do i get cheese cake now? yay! update soon. ^^
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Reviewed By: kahuffstix [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2006 13:37 CDT Comment/Review: it is either yukina or botan and i am thinking it is the first one. i liked this. please add more soon.
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