| "A love that will never be" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Title: omg
Reviewed By: Mirogrl On: June 06, 2006 17:19 CDT
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OMG I LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!!!!!!!!! IT IS SO GOOD ITS SO sad but im glad Tsukiko told him the truth!...so how many chaps r there gonna be? owell me loves it so muchly!! bye byes
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Title: thanks
Reviewed By: Hugs for Houshi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2006 15:54 CDT
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Thank ya all so much for reading my fic!!!! Im proud to have fans yay!
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Title: me
Reviewed By: Inuyasha gurl X On: June 06, 2006 05:42 CDT
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LOVE IT LOVE IT! YAY MIROKU AND TSUKI ARE GONNA DATE!! THATS SO AWESOME!! So Sakimi is based off your friend? Saki is pretty cool...but Inu is my puppy! *rubs puppy ears* yay loves it! I say yay too much but i dont care! yay yay yay!
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha gurl On: June 06, 2006 05:39 CDT
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Me likes! some grammar mistakes but thats ok..I failed grammar so I really couldnt tell. Yay! why isnt kagome in it? O well Wait are any of these people based off your friends or family? I really like it gonna review for every chap! Sayonara Hugs for Houshi! ^^
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Title: Hi again
Reviewed By: Gods Devil_8 On: June 06, 2006 05:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi again...still reading...I really hate Chiyo and hiro..and Tsukiko somehow reminds me of chise from Saikano. miroku sounds sexy in this! so yeah keep writing... loves it!
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Title: realyy awesome
Reviewed By: Gods Devil_8 On: June 06, 2006 05:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow this is the first time I read a romance..and I really like yours. Probaly kinda the same thing is hapening to me...only Im not trying to get pregnant...Omg I really like this...Yay lemons!
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Title: Chapter 1
Reviewed By: Chobits Chi On: June 06, 2006 05:28 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O my God I absolutly adore your fic! it is so sad! so why is it rated X? probaly for later chaps... But Tsukiko sounds really cool! Miroku is a jackass but hey hes cool anyway. KOGA IZ MINE!!!!!
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Title: Review for chapter nana (yah I know...I skipped reviewing chapter roku)
Reviewed By: Sakimi On: June 05, 2006 19:46 CDT
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...lemon in next chap. So yah...ja ne! ^.^ Chika needs to be somewhere! Like the random girl in the backround. And...(yes I know me needs to ask) Does inu not love saki back? ^.^ Yay! So Miryoku and Tsukiko are gonna have a baby without being married!!! that is sorta unique...most people get married. SO yah...JA NE!!!
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Title: review for chap go!
Reviewed By: Sakimi On: June 05, 2006 19:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
...yah... /singing/ INU-chan! Inu-chan! Aishiteru Inu-chan!
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Title: review for chapter yon!
Reviewed By: Sakimi On: June 05, 2006 19:40 CDT
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^.^ Inu-chan Inu-chan Aishiteru Inu-chan! /singing/ So yah...good chap...Hiro sounds hot...yah...(must i review again...I reviewed all ur chaps on the FF.net version)
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Title: Review for chapter san!
Reviewed By: Sakimi On: June 05, 2006 19:37 CDT
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Does Inu-chan not love Saki back? >.> poor Saki. ...what the hell happened to going to Kikyo's B-day party?!
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Title: Review for chapter ni!
Reviewed By: Sakimi On: June 05, 2006 19:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So yah...same good chap as it is on FF.net...still I have no idea what happened with Kikyo and CHiyo. I MEAN It's been almost 7 months in the fic, and we still don't know what happened with Kikyo and Chiyo! So yah...I should be doing my ss hw...but I am instead reviewing again...yah how pathetic. ^.^ yah...
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Title: ^.^ Review for chaper ichi!
Reviewed By: Sakimi (Inuyasha's nekko07: I am too lazy to log in) On: June 05, 2006 19:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi Niki-chan!...yah...I am reviewing like you wanted so here is my review: /sings/ WON'T YOU TAKE ME AWAY FROM ME!!!!!! ^.^ Doncha love Away From Me!? So yes, I typed some of your lemon! So far I got the note to you, the author's note, the song thingy, the "Owari" at the end, and the ending note for you ^^ yay! At this rate it should be done by like...Saturday or something (-- kami-dono onegai please let there be not lots of HW 2morrow so I can work on the Tsukiko/Miryoku hentai and 'A Feudal Fairytale' and 'Solitude'! So yes...yah...good chappy...Hiro's a dickhead. yay! ^^ Oh yah u can borrow Hot Gimmick 4 manana, k!? Ja ne! (oh yah...I'm too tired and busy to burn cd 2day, so me shall do it on a day where I don't have not a lot of HW. Gomen.) ~Sakimi (aka Saki-chan or Kaname-sama)
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Reviewed By: u know who On: June 05, 2006 19:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
O.O THAT WAS SUPPOSED TO BE A 8 for style of writing not a 4!!! GOMEN NASAI!!!!!
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Title: ^.^ Review for chaper ichi!
Reviewed By: Sakimi (Inuyasha's nekko07: I am too lazy to log in) On: June 05, 2006 19:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi Niki-chan!...yah...I am reviewing like you wanted so here is my review: /sings/ WON'T YOU TAKE ME AWAY FROM ME!!!!!! ^.^ Doncha love Away From Me!? So yes, I typed some of your lemon! So far I got the note to you, the author's note, the song thingy, the "Owari" at the end, and the ending note for you ^^ yay! At this rate it should be done by like...Saturday or something (-- kami-dono onegai please let there be not lots of HW 2morrow so I can work on the Tsukiko/Miryoku hentai and 'A Feudal Fairytale' and 'Solitude'! So yes...yah...good chappy...Hiro's a dickhead. yay! ^^ Oh yah u can borrow Hot Gimmick 4 manana, k!? Ja ne! (oh yah...I'm too tired and busy to burn cd 2day, so me shall do it on a day where I don't have not a lot of HW. Gomen.) ~Sakimi (aka Saki-chan or Kaname-sama)
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