| "A love that will never be" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Title: w00t
Reviewed By: Paul Sheldon On: June 08, 2006 05:37 CDT
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really awesome! miroku is my favorite character on the show Tsukiko is cool too. You make up really beautiful and awesome characters. She should have actually been In the InuYasha show but she isnt. really good must view chap 8.
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Reviewed By: Hugs for Houshi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2006 18:23 CDT
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Hanyou-Half demon youkai-demon ningen-human miki-tree trunk houshi-monk kazenonakae-Into the wind Hentai-sex, pervert,sex content sango-Coral Miryok-charming Inuyasha- Dog forest spirit kagome- seagull Kikyo-reflection Shippo-tail Shinjitsunouta-song of truth Ai no uta- song of love Sudoku- number single fukai mori- deep forest duh!
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Title: ok
Reviewed By: Hugs for Houshi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2006 18:18 CDT
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( to comdoms r us) what the hell kinda penname is that? no there will be no hentai Hentai- Japanese word meaning sex, pervert or sex content
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Title: woah!
Reviewed By: CoMpLiCaTeD On: June 07, 2006 18:16 CDT
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you seem to know you Japanese. Ok translate these words for me.. Hanyou Youkai Ningen Miki Houshi Kaze no naka e Sango Miryok Shippou Inuyasha Kagome Kikyo Shinjutsu no uta Ai no uta Rakuen Fukai mori Henati Atashi wa Sudoku
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: Rune queen 5674 On: June 07, 2006 18:10 CDT
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Oh my dear Lord! that was super! loves the angst. i beleive a porno moment should be in order! ^^
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Title: MUAHAHAHA
Reviewed By: MIKI HANYOU On: June 07, 2006 18:08 CDT
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OMKS! I love it! reads other fic lol! Miroku- where in the bible does it say a man cant fire off some knuckle children in the privacy of his neighbors living room while his neighbors at work because i dont have a DVD player? Well I dont know where it says it because the Bible is too damn long to read! LMAO! loves it!
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Title: .....
Reviewed By: I luv Bob On: June 07, 2006 18:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
yeah story is good.../imagines me as Tsukiko and Bobby as Miroku/ w00t! I wanna kiss bobby
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Title: yo
Reviewed By: Condoms R us On: June 07, 2006 17:59 CDT
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sick ass story man! iz ther gonna be some sex in it> It needs hardcore man!
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Title: omg
Reviewed By: Mirogrl On: June 06, 2006 17:19 CDT
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OMG I LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!!!!!!!!! IT IS SO GOOD ITS SO sad but im glad Tsukiko told him the truth!...so how many chaps r there gonna be? owell me loves it so muchly!! bye byes
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Title: thanks
Reviewed By: Hugs for Houshi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2006 15:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
Thank ya all so much for reading my fic!!!! Im proud to have fans yay!
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Title: me
Reviewed By: Inuyasha gurl X On: June 06, 2006 05:42 CDT
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LOVE IT LOVE IT! YAY MIROKU AND TSUKI ARE GONNA DATE!! THATS SO AWESOME!! So Sakimi is based off your friend? Saki is pretty cool...but Inu is my puppy! *rubs puppy ears* yay loves it! I say yay too much but i dont care! yay yay yay!
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha gurl On: June 06, 2006 05:39 CDT
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Me likes! some grammar mistakes but thats ok..I failed grammar so I really couldnt tell. Yay! why isnt kagome in it? O well Wait are any of these people based off your friends or family? I really like it gonna review for every chap! Sayonara Hugs for Houshi! ^^
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Title: Hi again
Reviewed By: Gods Devil_8 On: June 06, 2006 05:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi again...still reading...I really hate Chiyo and hiro..and Tsukiko somehow reminds me of chise from Saikano. miroku sounds sexy in this! so yeah keep writing... loves it!
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Title: realyy awesome
Reviewed By: Gods Devil_8 On: June 06, 2006 05:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow this is the first time I read a romance..and I really like yours. Probaly kinda the same thing is hapening to me...only Im not trying to get pregnant...Omg I really like this...Yay lemons!
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Title: Chapter 1
Reviewed By: Chobits Chi On: June 06, 2006 05:28 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O my God I absolutly adore your fic! it is so sad! so why is it rated X? probaly for later chaps... But Tsukiko sounds really cool! Miroku is a jackass but hey hes cool anyway. KOGA IZ MINE!!!!!
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