| "Of Ningen and Youkai" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: Update
Reviewed By: kyo kaze On: July 31, 2006 05:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok I am sorry to the readers but I have been very busy lately and have not had an oportunity to finish the next chapter. I assure you I am not quitting it. Give me some time and I will have it done. I should be able to have it up maybe mid august end of august. Once again I would liek to apologize for not updating for a while. Thank you.
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Reviewed By: Jasmin On: July 08, 2006 00:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey just wondering whats going on you haven't updated in a while and its worrying me. I really want to know what happens and I have no respect for people who don't know how to finish stories. Please update soon. You worried fan Jasmin
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Title: hey
Reviewed By: vilija(sayo) On: June 16, 2006 02:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey kyo i totaly love your story, you see, i usualy don't read fan fic, but yours is a realy catching one, and i just can't wait til next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Jasmin On: June 15, 2006 19:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow that was a cool chapter I overly loved it. Your authors note wasn't bad at all and its cool that you admit its your first time writing one. Well anyway please update soon. Your number 1 Fan Jasmin
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Reviewed By: Catherine On: June 07, 2006 20:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey I wanted to be your first review but some one beat me to it ya see told you you'd get good responses. Well anyway i submited a review so yay party lol. Ps this site hates me took me 4 trys to submit this.
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Reviewed By: Jasmin On: June 07, 2006 19:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked your story, though it was lacking a little description. It was really good and i can't wait till you update it I'll be reading. Try not to get dicourged either cause you have real talent and you will go far in writing fan fiction. Good Luck with the next update can't wait. Your friend, Jasmin
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