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| "Modified Procedure" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] | Reviewed By: Lemonfan88 On: September 02, 2013 11:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed reading this the writing was spot on, characters where in character and of course the sex scenes where nice to read, thought wishing they were longer. Also is there a small chance of a sequel or another side story but for Asuka and Kaji and how he should handle her, wink. Hope that you consider that idea or just doing a sequel at all, so good luck my friend. | Reviewed By: Scico-Jin [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2007 12:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yo you need to continue this i would like to see what misato would do with asuka. Also her interactions with kaji could be different if only slightly. Besides a threesome with misato, asuka and shinji would be welcome. By the way you have a tendency to forget a letter at the end of a word. Hey vegi if you would not mind could you drop a review of my work when its up? Thank you for your time. This has been a message from the local nutcase Scico-Jin
| Title: Once, again, A-Z triumphs.
Reviewed By: Kanto The Slayer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2007 00:56 EDT
Comment/Review:
I've read your other eva fics. I like to think that you did something rather devious, whether you know it or not. You have, by your own intention or some divine will, linked two of your stories- this one, and Passage. Considering that one story would have been a direct result of the other, I think this makes sense. Either that, or I just like to make connections between things. In any event, sterling, top-drawer work. Hell, I don't even need to rate this. It's that good.
| Title: Every guy wants a Misato growing up...
Reviewed By: thebigW [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2006 21:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...And we'd all grow up so well adjusted. That's what I tell anyone who'll listen. Too bad it took a bullet for her to realize what might have been, imo, but what you did here... The only thing I would have liked to have read was at the end where Gendo should have figured out what she did (and who knows, maybe he did!), and at least thanked her for making a man out of his son. Damn, you're prolific. I haven't even finished your AYA followup yet, but something drew me to this, and I'm so glad it did. Ja. W.
ad i | Title: Keep Going Please!
Reviewed By: EvanRocks On: June 20, 2006 01:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent story, would love to see a continuation of it. Look forward to additions, keep up the great work.
| Reviewed By: vegitoth [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2006 15:49 EDT
Comment/Review:
Perfect and romantic
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