| "Koibito" Reviews/Comments [ 87 ] |
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Reviewed By: raykay [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2006 09:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update. your story is cute and interesting.
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Reviewed By: numanumayay On: June 15, 2006 15:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update oh great one
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Reviewed By: vballbrea12 On: June 09, 2006 10:20 CDT
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that is so cute! i hope you can continue with this more. the story was very sad at the begining.
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Reviewed By: deathsangel4729 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2006 19:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this is an awesome story so far. I love how you wrote the death of Kagome's mother. I was curious about Kag's blue eyes though. Is it going to be explained later in the story? I also wanted to know how old Itchi was...because if kagome's three and he got to be what...eight or nine? Are you going to add what he did to the Ulchia clan or not? So many questions, but I've got one more for you. Are you going to add Itachi being an ANBU at thirteen? I really want to know!! So plz update as soon as you can. This story is going great so far.
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Reviewed By: darkenedsoul On: June 08, 2006 02:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great start so far. awsome pairing not to many around. please update soon
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Reviewed By: Juliahna On: June 07, 2006 23:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok the only reason i put a 9 is because u need to keep writing this story it's good no it's asome i love it so far and i hope u continue it. I like the baby talk a lot and i thought the part where the mother stabbed her heart to save her chirldren was intense and it was decribed very well like i said before PLEASE continue this story and i will continue to review 'k and one last thing i like about this story is that u decribe it so well that i can picture that in my mind and it's so cool i just love this story so PLEASE continue to write it.
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Reviewed By: kitsuna [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2006 18:05 CDT
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So KAWAII! PLEASE continue, im practically begging you! Oh, LOVE the pairing, by the way. Never saw one of them. Plz update soon and keep up the great work. 10/10 on all of the ratings.
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Title: wow!
Reviewed By: mistress_yume [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2006 13:44 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is amazing! please update soon!
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Reviewed By: y ue no rei(ff.net) On: June 07, 2006 04:10 CDT
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kyaaa! so cute!! plz continue
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Reviewed By: bluemon_175 On: June 07, 2006 02:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is really good keep up the good work. Can't wait to read more. Hope you UPDATE ASAP PLEASE!!!
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Reviewed By: gnfhn On: June 07, 2006 00:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like your story please continue i dont see any pairings like this and its good so go on
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Title: keep up the good work
Reviewed By: kagsinred [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2006 23:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please keep up the good work i just love the story
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