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| "Another Life" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2009 23:49 CDT
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Hmmm, interesting story so far, if a bit far between updates. Still, so far it's an awesome story, it just needs more to be written. So, continue to update then, kk? Ja ne.
| Reviewed By: Lelbet [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2008 04:06 CDT
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OK.... I have a huge urge to be one of those random no-name readers thats says: "wow! this is so cool! update soon!!" But i'm not going to act like a foolish noob 'cause that's not my style. I'm impressed with this fic and I do hope that you update soon, but I'm not going to press you. I like the idea of Voldemort being Harry's father and while I'm not fond of the whole 'Dursleys abuse Harry and he's rescued by a random Slytheren' theme, you make it work and make the story seem totaly new and give it a never-before-seen kind of feel to it. I must add a bit of constructive critisim here though. I must ask that if you don't already do it that you read over your chapters before you post them so that you can correct any random mistakes that pop up when writing, or typing, up the chapter. If you already do than that's great and I'm being critical for no reason. Although, if you have need of one, I am open to being a beta (only if you really want a beta. I'm not going to push you.) I hope that I haven't angered you, and if I have I appologize. I'm merely trying to help you make youre fic the best it can be and I hope you take no offence to that. Again, if you have I am sorry. On a brighter note, I love the way all of the characters interact and react with and to each other. It gives the fic a realistic feel to it. I believe that you have captured each of the characters' personalities perefectly here. As I said before I'm very impressed with this fic and I can't wait to see the next installment.
| Title: Well Done
Reviewed By: Silvinya [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2006 14:15 CDT
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Hey, Ok I have to say, that was severely evil of you. I only checked this story out out of curiosity and read the whole damn thing in one night. So, it is now 5:00 in the morning and I want nothing more then to find out what happens next. This was a very novel idea, I have to say, I never was real keen on the whole Voldy being Harrys father thing but this was facinating. The situation with Lucius has really got me thinking and I can't help but wonder what role old Dumbledore had in all this. I won't ask what you are planning, but I am looking forward to seeing where this goes. Very well done, and thank you for an interesting read. See Ya, Sil'vinya
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