| "The Forgotten Son" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Banov [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2006 11:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey, levels don't apply like you'd think- a level is more of an approximation of a pokemon's strength. So far I'd say he has the beginnings of a good team, though. But, I'm not going to say whether or not they all live to their full potential...
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Reviewed By: daveshan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2006 12:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not too shabby Banov. Although, if you are going to make Silver fuel the evil in Luke, don't make Luke end up as a freaking wimp with a horrible team of pokemon with not one of them over level 50.
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Title: Good Job
Reviewed By: Banov [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2006 16:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hideto-Sama, you just single-handedly saved my fiction on MediaMiner. I was gettign almost no reviews here, so I was about to annoounce that I'll discontinue putting up chapters here and say that you'll have to look for ti elsewhere; but thanks to you, I'm confident enough to put up the missing chapters. GIMME REVIEWS, PEOPLE! :P
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Reviewed By: Hideto-Sama [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2006 21:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome work!! Your story had me glued to the computer screen. I look forward to seeing Luke grow stronger.
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Reviewed By: Banov [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2006 14:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
Okay. I kept the yelling in caps, but everything non-yelling that I wanted to highlight was fixed up in the prologue. Hope that makes it better!
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Reviewed By: Bliksem [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2006 05:15 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
I gave you some comments via AIM, but here's one for your review. I believe that the capitalized words should be changed. Rather, I believe the method used to emphasize the words should be changed. As it is, it's overdone and sticks out. Italics or *something* like this would probably be better in my opinion.
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