| "Somewhere to Belong" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: hatorisblindeye [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2014 19:42 EDT
Comment/Review:
Hi. I just want to let you know how much I enjoyed your story. It
was really well written and it showed an excellent understanding of
these two characters. You kept my interest level up through the
entire five chapters so that when it ended I felt a little sad,
even though it ended so beautifully. Thanks for writing it.
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Reviewed By: ffpandamer On: February 16, 2007 10:54 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My heart was in my throat through this entire story! You conveyed their emotions so well, so beautifully, that I felt like crying! Wonderful story!!!
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Title: Wonderful
Reviewed By: Gossamer On: September 27, 2006 23:13 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wow..... very beautifully written fic. Love how you portray Iru/Kakashi... If this is your first, I definately would like to see more to come!
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Reviewed By: kirallie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2006 06:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sweet ending! Glad they were both okay!!
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Reviewed By: blondebrat2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2006 15:35 EDT
Comment/Review:
plz add another chapter. i lyked this story. dont let kakashi die!!
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Reviewed By: wolfram01 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2006 03:28 EDT
Comment/Review:
that was so freakin awesome but it was all so dad please don't let kakashi or iruka die! If you do I will send you a nin dog to get you!!!
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Reviewed By: kirallie couldn't be bothered to sign in On: July 25, 2006 21:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapter! Glad they managed to escape. Keep up the great work!!
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Reviewed By: kirallie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2006 23:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story so far! Who has them? Hope they're both okay and manage to escape. Did Kakashi plan to meet Iruka at the water or was he sacrifising himself so he could escape? Hope there's more soon!!!
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Title: actually CianaRui
Reviewed By: KATT251 On: June 09, 2006 20:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought this was an interesting beginning to the fiction. I enjoyed that it set up an initial framework for their relationship and potential personal doubts that will eventually affect their interactions. Kakashi's character is complex without being morose and Iruka is spot on. Nice job. My favorite quote so far was the final line "Obito, even your eye is blind..." it left me wondering just how much Kakashi does not understand about himself as well as the personalities of those around him.
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