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| "Sweet, Sweet Seduction" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: RS On: June 30, 2007 14:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Comment/Review:
this story has some good potential but it's disjointed; they sleep together but then they're still in the denial/seduction mode, and where did Schwartz come from ? I think a good editor would help as you have the bones of a fun read.
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Reviewed By: nightwriter [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2007 16:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHAT HAPPENS NEXT????? what's going to happen PLEASE WRITE
| Reviewed By: Starfall [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2006 14:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like, interesting read, but chapters 3 and 4 are the same.
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