| "Aang's Story" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: imkingdavid [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2008 18:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i hope you haven't completely abandoned this story. You've done great in spite of the fact that you haven't made any progress since early last year. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE continue. :) Thanks!
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Title: Good Beginning
Reviewed By: BlackLotus [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2007 21:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not bad, so far it's really good. My compliments to the author. If you remember from the series, Aang talks about the kids he hung out with...like Bumie and the firebender kid he used to get into trouble with (from the episode Blue Demon in season 1). What about talking about adventures with some of the kids from the other nations, maybe a first crush, have him ask about his mom and dad (which I liked the story you had for them...maybe have Gyatsu tell Aang a little more). I am looking forward to the next chapter, good luck!
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Title: Awsome
Reviewed By: Synister [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2006 09:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man I like this a ton and a half please hurry and finish the next chapter!!!
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Title: excellent!
Reviewed By: zorioko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2006 01:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm in love! This looks like a very promising fic ! I cant wait for more!!!!!!
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