| "In The Shadows, In The Light" Reviews/Comments [ 25 ] |
Reviewed By: Midnights_Amaya [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2009 00:28 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is it wrong that i'm terrified of whats going to happen next? The suspense may actually be killing me lol This fic is amazing the plot the characters viewpoints...the wild and kinky sex :D Deff gets a 10 in my book
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Title: Momentum & Interlude
Reviewed By: AngelmyAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2008 22:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Story is still so damn HOT. Can't wait for more, OMG! what are they going to do now that the Letters has shown up?
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Reviewed By: Princess Sin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2008 01:13 CST
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i guess now the fun really begins. now tht schuldig has gained access into yohji's head. so, that was all it took for him to gain access was to just say those three little words. oh well, but they are cutting it awfully short. since they have been floating around inside their heads for two days. all i can about the way farf woke schuldig up. OUCH! oh well, i'm just glad schuldig is all right. and now they will have chance of defeating essett. i hope everyone makes it out okay. anyway, i can't wait until the next update. i know i've probably said it before but this is one of my favorite weiss stories.
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Title: YAY! AN UPDATE!!!
Reviewed By: Anonymous Sister of the Author [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2008 12:21 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
now they all know that they love each other!!! i hope rosencratz doesn't get schuldig and yohji! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! ASOTA
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Title: Ch. 13
Reviewed By: pyrzm [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2008 10:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a nice surprise this morning! This story just gets better and better. Love the final scene.
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Title: More!
Reviewed By: pyrzm [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2008 22:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such an amazing fic! I'm very scared that you haven't updated in a while. I love how you've combined the two teams. And that Ken Kiss with Crawford! Whoo hoo! I hope you get lots of good inspiration soon! You have fans panting for you.
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Title: Ch. 12
Reviewed By: pyrzm [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2008 19:23 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your genius and creativity continue to amaze me. I don't know what to say, except that I've spent all day reading and my eyes hurt and there are people expecting me for dinner who are just going to have to wait. So there.
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Reviewed By: Jesslin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2008 14:19 CST
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Still really enjoy this story - hope you get a chance to finish. I can only reread it so many times :)
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Reviewed By: pinball62 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2007 10:33 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i absolutely love this story!!! there is so much detail that its really easy to imagine that its really happening. ken kissing crawford OMG!!! you have to (i mean HAVE to) update soon otherwise i dont know what ill do lol. u rock lol
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2007 19:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so happy for your return. I love the strong contrasts in your story. The way the plot moves from exploration of internal conflicts to external ones is wonderful. The switch in tones from humor and warmth, accompanied by foreshadowing, to suspenseful action, makes the story live vibrantly while feeling real. Best of all, I think, is the clarity and accuracy with which you present each character's voice. Just as minor examples: Crawford's voice is cool even when angry and worried; Farfarello's shifts between being courtly, a superb cook, and astute observer to a madman delighting in playing with the guard and needing to be restrained in the hospital which makes us all the more aware of his insanity. Ken's, Omi's, Manx's, and of course Schuldig's, Ran's and Yohji's voices are all similarly perfect. The closeness with which one vision was diverted only makes worries about the next all the stronger. I love as well the way in which each gain is not without some cost, as shown with the fusion. I hope you can return soon with more.
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Reviewed By: Princess Sin [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2007 00:33 CDT
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chapter s 24 and 25 were wonderful. i think my heart stopped when brad vision had begun to run its course. i think i passed out when schuldig got there to block the knife but then he got stabbed instead. but i am so glad that they are going to be all right. now the real trouble is about to begin. rosencrantz has called them. so, is it because of the fusion schuldig was able to survive being stabbed in the chest? i can't wait until the update. this story is getting so good that it is hard to wait for next update although i have no choice but to wait. anyway, one more thing, will crawford every remember that yohji was that kid that he and this other psychic was sent to get when yohji was a kid? i just remembered about that because i believe it was a prequel for this story. oh well, again wonderful chapter.
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Reviewed By: Omni-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2007 21:39 CDT
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I really do love this story so much. Not only are the sex scenes hot as hell, but the plot is really quite gripping. It will be a tense and interesting experience seeing how they plan to deal with Rosencrantz.
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Title: UPDATE SOON PLEASE!
Reviewed By: Anonymous Sister of the Author [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2007 18:55 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your work! pleae update soon! i want everything to turn out alright!!!! ASOTA
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Title: Interlude chapter 25
Reviewed By: AngelmyAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2007 15:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my goodness, incredible story, so damn good that I want to have written it myself. I am GreenEyed with envy and so enjoying the wonderful well written story, takes my breath away. Trudy
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Title: Sexy & intense
Reviewed By: jedaqia [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2007 01:20 CDT
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Always wanted to review this. Has been following since 'Sharp'. You amazed me with your writing skills. Really. You managed to weave some sexy scene to something that actually tugged peoples heart. Readers should really put more reviews for you instead of just drooling over your hot sexy stuffs :-p
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Reviewed By: Anonymous Sister of the Author [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2007 15:26 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
what was up with chapter 1? i really liked the story though...i was very distracted with all those id thingamabobx... ASOTA
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2007 21:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, intense and wonderful! The humor of the interaction between Crawford and Ken bracketing these two chapters, particularly the unexpected but perfectly fitting kiss was terrific. Aya's revenge and lesson just built and built in intensity -- not just from the incredible sex, but more importantly emotionally. The unveiling yet more about the characters, and letting them truly know each other -- there simply aren't enough superlatives out there. THANK YOU!
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Title: In the shadows, in the light
Reviewed By: AngelmyAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2007 13:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! Im breathless, that was intense. It was as if I was really there. Your writing is amazing. I bow down to your wonderful way of bringing the reader into your stories without them even realizing, until they are so deeply immersed that the end of the chapter is a shock of awarness that it isn't real and they are not really there. Wow! you have a wonderful gift. Thanks for sharing it.
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Reviewed By: Princess Sin [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2007 12:24 CDT
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wow, half way through the story i had to stop and get myself an ice ice cold drink. chapter 11 was super hot and super super sexy. who would have guess aya knew how to 'fist.' and the way how you had them all inside of schu's head and each finding out the other is inlove with each other. and then how they each appeared to the others if they were just normal people. it was such a well thought out wonderful thing. your wonderful writing style is why i love this story to death. and in the interlude when ken kissed crawford. i nearly fell out of my chair laughing when he kicked in yohji's door yelling at schu about kissing crawford. i really hope there isn't a sad ending instored for them like in crawford vision. i hope they come out of it alive and they will be happy. now i have to wait for chapter 12. awwww, but i don't want to wait that long. guess i have no choice. but i will be waiting in anticipation for that next chapter that will knock my socks off.
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Title: Excellent Job So Far
Reviewed By: misslady [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2006 17:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow you are an awesome writer. I have been following this storyline for about a month and a half. I stumbled onto it and fell in love with the writing style and the characters and just everything about it. Please keep up the wonderful work!! I cant wait to read what happens next!! Thank you!!
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Reviewed By: vivenia [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2006 16:10 CDT
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Hahahahaha.... Yohji kissed Farfie... this is great, can't wait for more.
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Title: Wonderful Story
Reviewed By: misslady [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2006 21:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a wonderful story and I loved the first story too. Please continue soon!! I cant wait to read more of your wonderful work!! Misslady.
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2006 19:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hurray and welcome back! I have so missed this story, and am delighted to find it here with two chapters I had not previously read. The relationship between the troika is delicious, not to mention the sex. The suspense has now truly been kicked up. I hope Brad's vision does not come true. I look forward to more.
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Reviewed By: jukebox_csi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2006 09:53 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This, as well as the prequel, are very enjoyable and well written! For a little bit, I really thought it was going to be revealed that Aya, with his bottomless pit of sharp powerful emotions, was the source re-charging Yohji's amplifying powers. Or rather, sex with Aya. *grin* Seems like it would make him more of an equal in the triad as opposed to being almost not needed. Looking forward to seeing the outcome. It'd be good to see Yohji taking Schu again instead of always being the telepath's bottom. Of course, I always love seeing Aya on the bottom, giving up that control of his. Good job!
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Reviewed By: darkephoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2006 21:41 CDT
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I know I've said it before and I will say it again several times. You are FABULOUS!
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