| "White Shot [NC-17] XXX" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Title: Don't
Reviewed By: nejiten4ever!! On: October 17, 2007 18:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please "DON'T" write NejiXTenten. ;D
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Reviewed By: lost_sasuke_loves_itachi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2007 14:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I surprisingly thought this was something I could see reading in the future. i know its been like months since I've actually read this fic and am now just having the time to read it but it hasnt meant I havent been looking for an update.
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Reviewed By: lordess of my sins On: November 30, 2006 21:07 CST
Comment/Review:
Plz plz plz UPATE!!! I would like to read another one like ch.2 or one with Itachi doing Sasuke. thank you and i love your story!
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Reviewed By: shinobicows [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2006 12:14 CST
Comment/Review:
me again, by the way, I just wanted to let you know, my favorite pairing is sasu/naru. If you don't mind, would you put a scene (or two) in there? ^-^
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Reviewed By: shinobicows [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2006 12:09 CST
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I have to say, i like it, in a sick (very sick) kind of way. I can't wait to read the next chapter, and I wonder when Sasuke will find out!? Great job, very kinky! *bows*
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Title: white shot
Reviewed By: anime _fan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2006 16:05 CST
Comment/Review:
I LOVED IT! you have to put some yaoi in it! PLZZZZZZ! YAOI YAOI YAOI YAOI!!! I LOVE YAOI! SasuNaru is my fav! PLZZZZ up date soon. ooo! and heres my favorite parings: NejixTenten, ShinoxHinata, SasiNaru, and what ever!
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Title: Update plz!
Reviewed By: HiroLover On: September 19, 2006 22:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
Plz, plz, plz, plz update soon! Your stories are awsome! I like ch. 2. I would like to read more soon!
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Title: Pairing...
Reviewed By: Ray-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2006 12:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
Sasuke and Sakura! They rock! I hate both of them!! But I love the couple!! >W
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Title: ????
Reviewed By: Mega_Punk666 On: June 22, 2006 19:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story sucks! If you really want to make anything worthwhile from a story like this, you had better put some YURI in here somewhere!!! Yuri is the best hentai out there. SO DO IT!!!
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Reviewed By: Itan-san On: June 19, 2006 02:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
LOVED IT! THE TENTACLE AND SAKURA WAS GENIUS! HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! UPDATE SOON, ONEGAI!
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Reviewed By: Uchiha_wana_be On: June 18, 2006 05:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
and just to make sure where crystal clear on who i was speaking of i was ofcourse speakeing of Itachi Uchiha PS my friend and i whould licke to beg you to please not make a kakashi Itachi pairng.They are 2nd best and best ninja in the world. Not to mention each of them are our favirote characters we dont even care if there is a yaoi pairing just not them pretty pretty pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease .
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Title: Jeez...
Reviewed By: ShadowCat210 On: June 15, 2006 13:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
I came hur to review my cuz's story Suicide Girls, and I saw this and said 'what the heck' and I read it and by God this made me horny. I like NaruSaku a lot and I didn't even know you could rape a man. I have a pairing for you...how 'bout a round of TsunadexJiraiya I mean, me and cuz have wanted to write one but she's working on her story and I'm just...well, I'm just lazy. But I've never EVER seen a TsunadexJiraiya fic before and her massive titties and his perverted know how would make sum good lemony goodness. And I speak for me and vixypixy_no9. I beg for this pairing!
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Title: reader/reviewer
Reviewed By: Tellemicus On: June 14, 2006 18:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm...This wasn't quite what I was expecting, and the chapter title would definitely have people jumping to conclusions. But it was alright. However, I shudder to read what you have in mind for the next chapter. NO YAOI!! I hope to GOD that you're not going to do that! Also, have you thought about including the other characters? Like Tenten, Hinata, Anko, Kurenai, or even Tsunade? Just food for thought.
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Title: Adept Author, Loyal Reviewer
Reviewed By: Tellemicus Sundance On: June 09, 2006 22:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
While your style of writing is a bit...stretched, it was most definitely worth the time to read. I have found few grammar errors, so good job. I haven't come across too many fanfics like this one, so it was most certainly very interesting. I hope that you can continue it very soon! Too bad you didn't have Zetsu take Ino as well. I hope that you add a little Naruto/Hinata in here, they are just a cute couple! And Anko would easily add a bit of 'dirtiness' to the scenes with her attitude. Please continue soon! Until next time...
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