| "His Dream" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: joshua trappe On: October 20, 2007 14:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was a great story. i think you did a great job with all of the characters. you even did great with Hinata's character, something which a lot of people seem to have trouble with. keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Saric [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2007 01:44 CDT
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The only problem I see is that you haven't added the next chapter to this story in nearly a year.
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Reviewed By: narutofan77 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2007 19:56 CDT
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make mor if it's not 2 troublesome.
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Reviewed By: AtlantisWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2007 13:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I feel like all I can really say is well done. It's a fantastic fic, despite its brevity. Honestly I think you should add more to this, in both directions on the timeline. (To be honest, I'm really surprised that I don't have more to say. When I come across a well written fic like this, I usually have more to say than a simple "good job.")
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Reviewed By: toratsume [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2006 22:53 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope that you keep going with this little short story that you have. It was really good! I know what you mean about getting more reviews for the Inu-Yasha writting too. It's the same for me, even though I only have one Inu, story and just starting my little Naruto story. This was great though!! I really do hope that you go deeper into it though, and not leave it here with me wondering what is going to actually happen next!
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Reviewed By: ClassicalTwist [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2006 22:51 CDT
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Good story =D. I enjoyed it thoroughly.
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Reviewed By: goliath184 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2006 22:53 CDT
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a nice fic. cant wait for an update. unfortunately the other reviewers are right. most pairings are naru/sasu. i ove this pair and hope you do great things with it update soon.
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Title: more
Reviewed By: Ten Tailed Wolf On: June 10, 2006 01:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice writing, plot, and conflict. Basically I like naruto and hinata stories. but still very good
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Reviewed By: beard2 On: June 09, 2006 21:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice fic. You could probably expand on it as well. Also, I am guessing that the reason you hadn't gotten many reviews is that people have to filter through all the other stories, unforunately yaoi being the main type, to find ones like yours. This pairing is my favorite in the Naruto universe and I wish to see more, if possible.
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Reviewed By: Rosellia On: June 09, 2006 14:23 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
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I am really happy I found this story....I have troule finding Naruto/Hinatat stories. I really like that they are older and I hope you can continue their story.
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Reviewed By: Dragonkiller [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2006 01:55 CDT
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I agree nowadays theres only yaoi or some other pairings here so continue this story
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Reviewed By: The Judge [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2006 22:36 CDT
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continue on with this one sounds like a good one. it is rare to find a good fic dealing with naruhina nowadays.
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