| "The Shikon no Tama" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2007 13:56 CDT
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Chapter 8: I tried to picture Sesshomarou hitting Jaken over the head with his staff while growling... let's just say it doesn't work. I nearly fell off the chair laughing. *leftover giggles surface*
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Reviewed By: shatter the sky comes quietly On: February 22, 2007 21:21 CST
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Hey, are you still alive? Will you finish this? I hope so. This is really good and deserves to be completed.
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Reviewed By: rainydays [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2006 23:43 CDT
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Wait... does this mean that Tomo is good/bad? I am confuzzled. I really like your story!! It's so good :o) I wonder what will happen with Rin... I mean, are you saying love as in father-daughter or romantic love? Anyways, I can't wait for another update!! :o)
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Reviewed By: rainydays (nsi) On: August 15, 2006 01:25 CDT
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Yay an update! That was a good chapter! I think Naraku figured out Sesshoumaru is on Inuyasha/Kagome's side... I mean, if Kanna knows Rin is with them, Sesshoumaru better come up with a good excuse. I hope you update soon! I can't wait to read more! :o)
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Reviewed By: rainydays (nsi) On: July 27, 2006 18:16 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe you only have 16 reviews; I really enjoyed your story! It's quite original. :o) Here I thought Inu and Kagome would live happily ever after. I can't wait to see what happens next!
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Reviewed By: mikokitty [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2006 07:12 CDT
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great story so far please update soon
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Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2006 07:43 CDT
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" They all stared for a moment before Inuyasha let out a loud "whoop". " - HEART XD well done I am enjoying this story throughly, it was a wonderful way to start my morning before I go pull muscles and such paddling lol update again soon ^^
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2006 01:47 CDT
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lOVE IT!! UPDATE!!!!
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Title: o.o;
Reviewed By: Nush2007 On: July 04, 2006 05:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the ratings say it all!!! o.o; AWESOME FIC!!! I want to read mooreee! Why aren't the prayer beads working? huh? huh? come on, tell me! -pouts- fine, dont tell me. just come out with a new chapter soon!!! please!!
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Reviewed By: ~Alanna On: July 04, 2006 02:05 CDT
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OI!! What happened? Why wasn't he sitted?
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Reviewed By: ~Alanna On: June 30, 2006 19:10 CDT
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cool, update soon!!!!!
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Reviewed By: ~InuyashasBiggestFan On: June 27, 2006 13:56 CDT
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Good chapter, update soon!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Michelle* On: June 27, 2006 13:55 CDT
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LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2006 12:10 CDT
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I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please please please update soon, this story is amazing, Kagome is the Shikon no Tama and she has pink hair, punkish if you know what I mean.UPDATE SOON!!!!!
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Reviewed By: invisblg9 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2006 22:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWWWWW MAN!!! don't stop there! I gotta find out what she turns into if she uses the jewel on herself!!! What's gonna happen next?!?!?! please update soon!
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Title: frani1375
Reviewed By: frani1375 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2006 15:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your story alot. The story line is really original and I have yet to come across anything similar to it. Keep up the good work! And update soon.
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Reviewed By: Cricket42 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2006 15:34 CDT
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Hello i lovce this story thus far. wonderfully written. Update plz ~Cricket42
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Reviewed By: pokiepal [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2006 07:36 CDT
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I really like your story! Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: the bastard child On: June 10, 2006 01:16 CDT
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noooo!!! what happens next!? damn you... aw, yay. good for miroku!
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Reviewed By: the bastard child On: June 10, 2006 01:10 CDT
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chapter 3 was a very good chapter. ah, inuyasha has the best intentions, but he always manages to fuck everything up... poor fool. nice job. i love the "why the tears?" line! it was a subtle detail, but i like that word choice. nice job.
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Reviewed By: the bastard child On: June 10, 2006 00:59 CDT
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cute so far... damn kikyou. i like her, but she's gotta go, ne? i like the line about kagome's voice being like a love song, full of passion. very cute.
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