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| "White Noise" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] | Reviewed By: geekeyed On: July 02, 2008 17:26 CDT
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Is Una never ever going to be motivated enuf to write in a similar vein again..? Time passes by, adds its cumulative weight to our starvation, oh whatever.. just come back to Batou-Motoko creativity, why dun u, Una!
| Reviewed By: DreamReaper [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2007 17:35 CDT
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Yeah...something happened to my last review (o_O). Anyway, hope to hear from u soon...sorry for using this as an e-mail. U're greatest fan, DreamReaper
| Reviewed By: DreamReaper [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2007 17:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What happened to u, Una? I've been waiting for over an year now for a new Motoko/Batou adventure, maybe a sequel to this great fic but...nothing :-
| Reviewed By: Aizu On: March 14, 2007 19:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, i really like this fanfic, the best motoko/batou lemon fanfic i've read this far and you managed that part really well... those are rare, but apparently it's the quality which counts, not the quantity first of all i like the plot, the dramatic aspect which accompanies the whole story. i really like how you pointed out the characters, especially motoko's. being a oneshot is really a pity for this fanfic... there are great conditions for a continue - what about the source of the worm? and how does the relationship influence them in their following daily life? anyways, whether continue or not, i'm looking foward to read other batou x motoko fanfics from you! about the rating: english isn't my native language so i better won't rate spelling/grammar. haven't noticed any mistakes either. the style of writing was figurative, describing the athmosphere and the feelings very good. i really enjoyed reading it, the 10 is out of the question.. the circumstances of batous confession and their little "dance" as you use to call it, are really innovative. All in all: thank you for this wonderful piece :)
| Reviewed By: animebarb [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2007 06:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this. I have been waiting for something about these two. I agree with the previous reviewer, it would be great to continue this.
| Reviewed By: DreamReaper [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2006 14:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good work. U got my attention with your choice for medieval arsenal, instead of futuristic weaponry¡Knice touch (besides, I¡¦m a huge fan of medieval stories ^_^). The dragon was a little predictable, but what¡¦s a knight without his dragon, right? The dialog between Togusa and Batou is a little creepy¡KI mean, what father in his right mind would choose his wife over his child?!? But men are a little selfish in love (I should know, since I¡¦m a dude ƒº), so I can deal with that. Here¡¦s an idea: continue the story, be the first one who writes about this couple relationship. I mean, there are 100 stories about their first kiss, but nothing about their future as a couple. Anyway, keep up the good work! ƒ³
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