| "Smooth Sailing" Reviews/Comments [ 16 ] |
Reviewed By: Kiador StarFang [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2008 19:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought things would end up being a yaoi but I was gladly wrong lol. I loved it!
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Reviewed By: innocencedied2nite [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2008 04:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I rarely give anything such a high score. But this deserved it. I am still trying to not laugh out loud while I am typing this- at the risk of awakening my kids. Wonderfully expressed tension and the dialog was perfect. The part with the pillow fight had me rolling. Absolutely ingenious writing!
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Reviewed By: Lu:Ciel69 On: December 04, 2007 23:54 CST
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aww i LOVE this its so cute and funny xDD write more plz!! (O*^-^*O)
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Reviewed By: phoenix_of_hell [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2007 11:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, very good quality humor. It sure is something, managing to write both humor, and angst. I laughed my head off, it was hilarious!
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Reviewed By: RyousGirl567 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2007 13:24 CDT
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That was probably the funniest thing I've ready in a while. Great job! ^_^ I was laughing the whole time, picturing the two of them behaving like chlidren in my head. I wouldn't doubt it if that was what actually went on. XD Excellent fic and happy writings! ~Tori-chan~
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Reviewed By: MessiahsBlackAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2007 21:30 CDT
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Hahaha! Oh man, that was fan-freakin'-tastic! I laughed so hard, I cried! Nice job... :)
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Reviewed By: nolongerfunctioning [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2007 02:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
CUTE CUTE CUTE!
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Reviewed By: Gravers Paradise [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2007 10:06 CDT
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That was good and really funny. is there going to be more?
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Reviewed By: Kirie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2007 02:58 CST
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Oh dude, I have to stop laughting! That was funny as hell, great job! You've made my night a happy one that's for sure! Loved it!
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Reviewed By: A,manda On: December 27, 2006 23:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes that was HYSTERICAL!!!! I love the part, "and he tried to strangle him with his handcuffs it was great" :D
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Title: Slayer66 (not logged in xD)
Reviewed By: Slayer66 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2006 10:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it ^^ Everytime I read it I always laugh so much that everyone stares at me x.x 10/10 ^^
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Reviewed By: Kanousei On: October 30, 2006 12:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You captured the characters and all the situational ironies so perfectly! And there was just enough hinting at sexual tension (or so it seemed) to keep me happy.
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Reviewed By: taintedesire On: October 18, 2006 15:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
"I'm not a chew toy." omfg it cracked me up~ *muacks*
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Reviewed By: quaedam [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2006 16:00 CDT
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I do love your Light/L fics. . .it's probably my favorite yaoi pairing of all time, but it's rarely written so well. ^^
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Reviewed By: Toshii. On: August 13, 2006 22:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my dear god. xD That is hillarious. I love it.
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Reviewed By: Kuru Sama On: June 30, 2006 09:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This a a pretty fun read and overall pretty darn cool!
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