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| "After Snow" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Title: WOW, SOOOO GOOD!!!
Reviewed By: bugaboo107 On: October 28, 2006 23:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was the best one-shot I've ever read, so short yet conveys such a great storyline! 10s all around!!! First off, I love HatoriXTohru pairings, because he is (on the inside) so vulnerable and loving a character, and Tohru is the perfect person for him, so compassionate, funny, and loving. I love the doctor, he needs someone to take care of him once in a while! Very well written, great characterization, I love the gentle, sweet kiss. So tender! Just how I imagine Hatori to be. It was so gentle and touching. I like the ending, it leaves us wondering... Keep writing fanfiction, you are great at it! Do you have any at fanfiction.net? (They have tons of Fruits Basket stories-- +10,000!!!) Thanks so much for posting your story! I'll be watching for more stories from you! I can't wait!!! Thanks again!!! ^_^
| Reviewed By: Lady Valkyrie On: September 18, 2006 02:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aw that was so adorable. I can't think of anyone more deserving of a girl like tohru...except all the other animals...sigh if only there were more tohru's in the world of fruba. Or a writer willing to do every pairing...(hint, hint!!!). Keep up the great fanfiction.
| Title: After Snow
Reviewed By: chibikalia On: August 23, 2006 21:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my god this was soooooooo adorable! I love Hatori and Tohru pairings!! this had a smile on my face the whole time while reading it!
| Title: Cute
Reviewed By: Titus and Driger [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2006 04:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
i enjoyed this fic and even though i think that the pairing is weird ( But Then again i only read male pairngs ) i think that the story was cute and that Hatori and Torhu where still in character Great Story
| Reviewed By: Iloveyoudearly [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2006 16:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
KAWAII! That was so extremely adorable. You kept both Hatori and Tohru so well in character. I absolutely loved it!!!
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