| "Life's Complications" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Title: regret
Reviewed By: Fuyuna [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2008 07:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Do you still remember me? i'm Pan's number one enemy that write a desperate and despair review in your Love's Complication fic. i'm suprised that you make someone pity them. And how irrational Pan argument about her situation and Vegeta with Satan. He desserterd the family because he should make sacrifice? Doesn't she realize that someone to be sacrificed is meant a victim? It's a victim of their sin. Maybe you make someone help them because of so the story could continue. But They are not deserved that!!! I could not bear it. They deserverd the worst of all possible. And here they get better and still trying to trick Bulma and family more? How dare them!!! I'm in pure hatred toward Pan, that will not change forever in this story eventhough she is in the most tragic state, maybe it even affect me in other Pan's story which she wasn't a bitch. And i feel a pure sympathy toward Briefs family, they losing more than Son's family. So I resolve that i will not continue to read this fic. It's not good for my heart and my mental. Not that it's matter with you anyway. I'm just one of many reader, and i think it's better for you not to have someone like me who always make you dissapointed with the review.
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Reviewed By: Subu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2007 04:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like this story a lot. It is very different and I can't wait to read the further developments.
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Title: Life's Complications
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2006 14:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2006 21:32 CST
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Well i'm glad that someone is helping them out. Tell me why can't vegeta get a job again??? can't wait to read the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: chiku [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2006 03:42 CST
Comment/Review:
this is a good story, please update quicker
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Title: good stuff
Reviewed By: StarbearerTM [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2006 18:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like Vegeta having to go get a job to support Pan. Now we will see how the Prince copes with real life. It shows his love and devotion to her in a touching way. Please write more soon. I'm liking this more and more :)
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Title: meh
Reviewed By: jetset6 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2006 15:47 CDT
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its not bad, but i'm surprised hurcule hasn't shund them like the others.
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Title: Fight
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2006 04:59 CDT
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You should have let vegeta knock his lights out. lol. it's starting to turn into a real life story for tem both. real life issue about money, babies, a home. like i said before i'm glad your writing this story again. I wonder how hercuke is going to act when he sees her. can't wait for more.
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Title: Happy
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2006 17:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'm sooo happy you're writing this story again. I feel sorry for them, but i know there manage. please update!!
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