| "Together" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Tani [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2007 18:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
This looks really good so far. I liked the little chip swiping thing at the beginning; I really thought it worked well to illustrate the relationship between Chouji and Shikamaru. I'm really worried about Chouji though!! I'll be looking forward to seeing the next part.
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Reviewed By: Ceer Uchiwa [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2006 05:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
ohhhh... poor chouji *snif* Nara is gonna kick their buts... right? Oh, PLEASE continue, it REALLY good. k? k. hehe. you did really good with this story and i cant wait till the next chapter!
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Title: Hey!
Reviewed By: evilvixen [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2006 09:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
What gives!? I want to know what would happen! It was gettin' so good... To da point...like it. Pls new chap at soon has possible! Interestin' pair.
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