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| "Overrated" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] | Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2008 20:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh wow. That was great. I like that Inuyasha didn't give in, that he felt he didn't have anything to prove to anyone. That was excellent. Well written, too! Thanks! ^_^ Snow
| Reviewed By: forbiddenblood [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2006 11:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love how you showed that Inuyasha's life was hard and nobody really seemes to grasp how hard it is for him. He doesnt need to prove to anybody anything and you're right, being the better man is overrated. I really enjoyed it. It had me waiting to see what he would say next! Kagome is just too good-hearted sometimes, it borders on stupidity. -sigh- Anyway, you write very good! keep it up!
| Title: Wow.
Reviewed By: AlalaMoon of the Punished Inu On: June 17, 2006 22:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really good fic, screw any who say so. Not only are you a great beta, encouraging me to go on writing, but your a better author than half the screw ups out there. Sesshomaru is a jerk, Kagome is abusive to Inuyasha, and you know what... It doesn't matter, cause this is your fic and if someone can't get over the angst in a fic... Then they can lay off. I love this fic and hope to see more. I really hope to see more. Alala...
| Reviewed By: emoni On: June 17, 2006 22:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, you are a decent writer, but I have to say, I was very upset by the concept of the story. First of all, the basis of Sesshoumaru seeming almost completely horrible is really off. Obviously he does have some good in him, because he has indirectly (but conciously) saved the hanyou a few times. Another thing that bugged me was the fact that you dissed Kagome in such a horrible way. You made her seem stupid, naive, ignorant. She is not some hillbilly from the future. She is all too aware of the darkness in people's hearts. What is Naraku, after all? Basically, the people were way out of character, and the tale wasnt far enough in depth for us to formulate a solid opinion on InuYasha's resoning. In fact, your opinion on those others characters was really obvious, and, as I've said, quite upsetting. You are not a horrible writer, though you could improve quite a bit, yet the whole premise of the story made me feel disgust at it. Please, if your going to write, honor the characters of what you write about, dont degrade and insult them.
| Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2006 20:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was an exceptional piece of work. But, seeing that it was from you I could expect nothing less.~B reading U!
| Reviewed By: dangersque [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2006 23:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know it's only a one-shot, but I kind of want more...
| Reviewed By: @_@ [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2006 19:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh...nice. Very good. Your writting style is good, flows very nicely. Oh...please update Fifty Years soon...I know you just did, but...It's so awesome! ..######.....######...####.....###.... .##....##...##....##...##.....##.##... .##.........##.........##....##...##.. .##...####...######....##...##.....##. .##....##.........##...##...#########. .##....##...##....##...##...##.....##. ..######.....######...####..##.....##.
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