| "Warmth within the Cold Facade" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Braden [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2006 21:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was kinda depressing but well written.
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Reviewed By: Fluffymiroku [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2006 04:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
regarding ur qns about the 7 pages, my first chapter has seven ages. There are no other chapters. :) tks for reviewing.
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Title: about your story
Reviewed By: blackskull On: June 12, 2006 14:01 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Comment/Review:
What happened to the rest of your story. It stated on the file page that you have seven pages. But I only encountered one page. There's no link to the rest. Anyways, It's a pretty interesting beginning. Sesshoumaru is not too ooc. It's pretty good how you describe the pain on both parties whether it's physical or emotional. Keep it up. It's a bit different from the similiar theme where everyone in kag's group died and sess will come into play in Kag's life after that.
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