| "S.H. HIGH" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: star555555528 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2006 20:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hmmm.....Naraku could have the power 2 turn into a spider....thats the only 1 i could come up w/ please update your awesome story soon and instead of useing u put you it makes it a lot easier 2 read. if you would like i could edit for you since i'm a grammer freak. ok well if you want me to email me at tiffany@myfarm.net
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Title: S.H.high
Reviewed By: YukiTenshi712 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2006 15:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i can see a good story starting to develop! Nice plots and stuff keep it up! I think you shoudl give Bankotsu water powers,Kohaku wind and flying powers and Naraku..lightening powers! with special gloves that shoot lightening! Ja ne *Jessica*
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