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| "Why Zuko and Katara Could Never Be" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Title: Why Zuko and Katara could never be
Reviewed By: JMavatar7211 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2007 18:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Comment/Review:
I'll give u 3 reasons why Zuko and Katara can't be: 1. there's an age difference of like 3 yrs. 2. they're from different nations 3. and I didn't approve of zutara.this would've been a Zutara show, except Aang called me up and had me hypnotize Mike & Bryan. Then i took Zuko for myself(: Boo Maiko and Zutara! Go Tyko(Ty Lee/Zuko), Zue(Zuko/Yue), Toko(Toph/Zuko),Jinko(Zuko/Jin) and my fave 1...Zemma Jade!!(Zuko/Me:)
| Reviewed By: darkmistress in the shadows On: April 09, 2007 11:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I REALLY don't mean to be such a mean girl here...but I do have a few things against what you did say. You were creative and it was fine to read AND you did a very good job in writing this little story against the pairing. BUT oppisites (total spell check there...O_o) do attract. Ask my mom and dad. My dad is black and my mom is white and if that's not enough--my mother is totally different than my dad. They hardly agree on the same thing but it's weird b/c they love each other to death. I know, seriously weird but it works out. I know not too many people like Zuko but if you were in his shoes, what would you? It would kinda suck...bad. He was a banished prince, his sister's out to kill him and he has no idea who to trust and where his life is going. So, really, he's not evil, just completely confused of the world. Overall, it was very nice to read and you did a good job. If it were me, I would make grammer mistakes like I always do. lol. Anyway, you did great and I hope you write more in the future--you had good points. Oh, by the way, the ending was creative and funny. ( to me. The part where Zuko says, "I have a heart..." sadly. That is good.) Keep it up.
| Title: I Humbly Disagree
Reviewed By: Ahsmet [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2006 18:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
I humbly disagree due to the depth of Zuko's character. Zuko is merely a mal-adjusted teen who is going through difficult times. he is not Evil, just desperate to return to his home. also, i believe zuko and katara is possible, since opposittes attract, ne? either way, i enjoy your pieces, jimmy. please continue to write despite comments like these. humbly yours, -Ahsmet
| Reviewed By: EmperorJaden [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2006 03:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
*chuckles* Now that was funny, espically the end "I have a heart...." Zuko: I do! Me: Silence Minion! *zaps him with lightning* Zuko: *Zapped* Avatar Cast: Yay! *The above was me trying to be funny...and failing*
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