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| "Spun Sugar" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Title: amazing
Reviewed By: osionide [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2007 14:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay i'd just like to say WOW! You-you wonderful amazing god-like author-have managed to keep me sat at my desk for THREE DAYS STRAIGHT! I found your fic by sheer chance and I am counting my lucky stars that I did. I have just read all the way through from tea-time to chapter 9 of spun sugar and I could not stop, every time I finished a chapter it was 'I'll just read 1 more' n then it was morning! (luckily I'm on my week off). It's brilliant to start reading a fic on my favourite series and have characters from other fandoms making an appearence aswel. Your writing style is lovely and easy to read, (i picked up a few spelling errors and such but who the hell cares when its a fic of this magnitude!) The plot is increadible, it keeps the reader draw in throughout the whole chapter and leaves them panting for more, and the way you handle multiple plot-lines (eg we have Ryo adopting Landy, Papa D pregnant and a vilian on the loose plus more all at once) is ingenious. Also let me congratulate you on the volume of this fic, its soooo long I can really sink my teeth into it, I hope it will continue to grow and grow and grow and I will be reading every single chapter Now the complaint- noooooooo how could you leave it on a cliff hanger like that and not update for months, i want to cry *snif sniff*- Complaint over :) Ahh I think I've said all I can manage for now seeing as I'm about to collapse from exhaustion, Keep It Up darling i'm rooting for ya. Also i dont know if media miner lets you do this or not but when you update it would be brilliant if you could let me know, I cant wait fot the next chapter.
| Reviewed By: Xo Shu Mhing [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2006 22:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great stuff! Hrmmm.. So who is after D? Can't wait to find out more!
| Reviewed By: Xo Shu Mhing [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2006 14:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great as always! Please keep up the great work!
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