Title: A bit preachy
Reviewed By: MisterPretzel On: December 24, 2006 13:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well written but the preachiness is a little annoying. After the first hundred times you hear a character whine about the "plight" of the gay man you start to get irritated. But thats just a minor complaint. My only major complaint is that there's a bit too many references to the real world, like Dollar bill, and the fact that youre adding Mental Freaking Illness into a FANTASY setting. Mental illness in a fantasy setting is ridiculous. Other than that, great story please finish.
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