Reviewed By: Merangelgal On: October 29, 2006 15:54 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: I really enjoyed this story. There were a few times I was a bit confused as to what was going on, such as the flashback when Serena was a child and remembering being the moon princess, but in general it was really great, and I was glued to the story the whole way through! Loved having the twins there, the mention of Rose and Tranquility, and that you got Darien to get out of the break up quickly! I hate those two apart! Loved this story! Wish there was another chapter though... :0)
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