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| "A Brother's Bond" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Unseen Watcher [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2007 23:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, if only... how it could have been in a positive way is always nice to see. And there's no way to get back the experience of the trust of a child.
| Title: Aw, so kawaii!
Reviewed By: Tohru819 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2006 00:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
That's pretty strange, I can't imagine Yun-chan wanting to be with Aya more than Tohru-kun. But I do hope that Yun-chan and Aya can get along. It's so cute how Yun-chan looks up to Aya in this fic. Espescially when Yun-chan is a kid, I mean he was already totally cute, (have you seen him as a kid? He was SOOOO adorable! ^_^) But the way he acts in this fic just makes him even cuter! I wish that Aya had been there for Yun-chan back then, when he was needed so badly, but I think that eventually Yun-chan will get over it and they will become friends.
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