| "Shadow of the past" Reviews/Comments [ 121 ] |
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Title: Chapter 2
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2007 15:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Started great. Curious to what happen to the other 8 chapters. Update soon. Can't wait to see if it follows the story before the alterations.
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Reviewed By: Lillian9 On: April 02, 2007 11:05 CDT
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You haven´t decided the pairings yet? I would suggest you get Kuronue an own body and pair him up with Kagome...please?!?! Sadly, there aren`t too many fics with him... And too many of the fics that ARE there are yaoi... I think he would match well with our favorite miko. Besides... the Inu/Kag, Hiei/Kag, even Kur/Kag pairing isn´t really THAT exciting any more (at least in my opinion ;-)) PLEASE update soon!
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Reviewed By: angeltsuki [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2007 15:44 CDT
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Oo Kewl... UPDATE THE HOTNESS! I luvels it =3
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Reviewed By: Chaos_Theory_Proven [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2007 00:21 CST
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If your still writing please please please up date it's sooo good so far I'd looooooove to see where it goes!
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Reviewed By: xx insignificant xx [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2006 11:55 CST
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I must admit, I was not expecting this. Props to you for creativity. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Kurama'sFoxyMiko On: December 13, 2006 13:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DAMN! Just when it was getting to a good part, too. Well Hope you update this soon. It's a major improvement from your first try^^
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Reviewed By: Devilangel620 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2006 00:09 CST
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em...I think I'd like longer chapters with more time in between updates. Too bad that person MadMiko thinkz therez actually a poll for HK, lol. Im too sick of reading HK fanficz, maybe l8tr. X3 thx for updating.
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2006 02:48 CST
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Okay! That chapter kind of blew my mind. Kuronue and Kagome sharing a body? Obviously, with such an auspicious beginning, I gotta vote for a Hiei/Kagome pairing. But I am dying to know what your plans are for Kuronue -- will he get separated and somehow get his OWN body? I hope so! He's too sexy a character to be stuck in Kagome's body -- he's got to get out and find him a woman. And please don't do the whole guy/guy thing with Hiei or Kurama with him. Seems that almost all I ever see written about Kuronue. I'd like to see him paired up with a kickass woman like Sango -- and Kagome/Sango action? Please NO! Can't wait to see how Kagome explains to her friends she got away. Does she even know? There's got to be a lot of explaining coming up, ne? So, yeah, I'd like to see him get his own body, but perhaps Kagome retain some of his sultry, sexy ways. What is Koenma going to do with her/him? There's a lot of goodness in store, isn't there? Can't wait to see it!
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Reviewed By: Devilangel620 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2006 23:41 CST
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^______^ I hope that this time around you'll be satisfied on how you go about writing this. It'll be a fun to see what happenz now.
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Reviewed By: shadow fox101 On: December 08, 2006 17:39 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE PLEASE update soon it sounds really really good!! 10/10 or 100/100 your choice
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Reviewed By: Fox Vixen(nl) On: December 08, 2006 09:47 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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The new beginning is good. Update soon...ps you put lost instead on lots for Inuyasha's statement.
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Reviewed By: angeltsuki [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2006 19:41 CST
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YAY MERMAID!!!!! *pokes* Kewl
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Reviewed By: Elemental_dea (not logged in) On: November 04, 2006 18:30 CST
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*claps* i love the next chapter, but its so short!! i'll be waiting for the next chapter to be posted. please update soon!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Charlene On: October 26, 2006 18:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
soooo cool..... UPDATE!!!!!! Thank U
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Reviewed By: Devilangel620 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2006 00:20 CDT
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gotta love how you depict Kuronue in your own way. He cant swim, though probably many Japanese people at the time could considering the sea was a great resource to them, and I really love that. I guess he was on his wings most of the time, so no need for swimming. Ive seen many stories not going into detail about Kuronue's character but Im happy you didnt do that. And now we can plainly see that Kuronue doesnt realize what he's got till itz gone. (lol, that song) Hope to see more soon.
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