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| "What's in a Name?" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Dustbunny3 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2006 17:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You certainly know how to turn a little detail into an enjoyable story. I've wondered about the continuous use of "Honda-san" as well, even in my short time as a Fruits Basket fan. From what I know of the serious (only so much, I'm afraid), you got the characters down pat. Nice work
| Title: What a great fic! ^_^
Reviewed By: Tohru819 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2006 15:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's so cool how you can make such a great fic and it's all about why Yun-chan can't call Tohru-kun by her first name. It's such a simple little thing in the actual Furuba storyline but such a wonderful and detailed fic was made from it. Yun-chan says that angels and demons cans't be together, well I guess he's never read the manga "Wish". I'm just kidding, I don't think that angels and demons can have relationships like that and definately not with eachother! Although I would never consider Yun-chan to be a demon or anything like that. (I think that word is more fit to describe Akito) Yun-chan thought it was odd for Tohru-kun to be surprised that he missed her. Their problem is that they both think so lowly of themselves but don't realize that the other one is feeling the same way. It seems like they would have figure it out by now that neither one thinks that they're better than the other.
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