"Secret Lovers" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: anonomous_tenshi On: September 26, 2006 12:50 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: HOT!! Very good lemon. A little basic but still, you had pretty good detail. I liked the little solo act at the beginning, I thought it added a bit of a twist to the story. It had me thinking 'if tomoyo and sakura are lovers why isn't tomoyo showing up?' I can tell you'll get better every story you write. yours truly tenshi
| Reviewed By: Vandreador [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2006 07:58 CDT Comment/Review: Keep up the good work!!!
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