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| "Code Lyoko E79: Angel of Death" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: DevinS On: June 25, 2006 11:40 CDT
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Pretty dark, and twisted, with Yumi... I can't wait to read your next story, it's already up. This story is dark, will it set the tone for the rest of the episodes?
| Reviewed By: Garfie2000 On: June 14, 2006 21:40 CDT
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Wow, dark, waaaaaaaay dark. I can't believe you did that, I mean, William... And what will happen to Yumi? Doing what she did before William... And now that it happened, poor Yumi, but the group is going to be messed up over this.
| Reviewed By: Famouf Amof On: June 14, 2006 13:33 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You screwed some things up, at the end "Yumi held on to Yumi"? Fix it, other then a few mistakes it is a great story, and will Yumi do it? Can't wait for the next story!
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