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| "The Gambling Series" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] | Title: Brunette response
Reviewed By: Koji N On: July 01, 2009 19:31 CDT
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Yes X3 Brunette refers to someone with dark hair (usually brown or black because those are natural colors). Since Zexion has dark hair, I call him a brunette.
| Title: Brunette?
Reviewed By: Meph On: July 01, 2009 19:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
I LOVE this series xDDD my only complaint is like... hair colors. You say that Zexion is a brunette, but he was silvery blue hair. http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v625/Galahad_Mcloud/Kingdom%20Hearts%20-% 20Chain%20of%20Memories/zexion2.png as seen there. but other than that I'm happy. not a lot of people with Zex and most of the time he's uke (he's an uke, but I mean he's a girly boy, not tough and smart like he actually is). I liked how you put him in this :3 and did a pretty good job of keeping him in character. haha. he's my favorite. thank you for writing that x3
| Reviewed By: KGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2007 19:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've only read the first chapter so far and I love it! You need more lovin'! XD Xem is such a perv, Axel's just insane, Siax is so cute (X3), And it's just fun! I'm reading more!
| Reviewed By: melady101 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2007 12:24 CDT
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*stares* I can't believe you only have four reveiws for this! >.< This story deserves better then just four *sighs* Well, I just got finished reading this and I have to admit it's some of the best I've read in a while, even though it's OOC. It seems like Xemnas needs a life, but his boredom becomes out entertainment. Again this is one of the better fics out there I've encountered so thank you for posting it and I hope to see more soon.
| Reviewed By: Bluedrake [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2007 07:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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Well, this last chapter took me a little by surprise. It's the first time in your fic that characters actually have intercourse. Before, it was either molestation or voyeurism, so I was surprised, but pleased of course. Xemnas/Zexion is a very sexy pairing. I wish you'd put more Marluxia in there, but it's your story, so hey, do as you like! You sure like to picture Axel as a sex crazed bastard. Poor Roxas! Overall, I find this fic very enjoyable, despite the fact that it's an OOC-fest. Keep up the great work!
| Title: love it
Reviewed By: newdkidt [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2007 09:56 CST
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i wonder what was in the other boxes. i hope you keep going.
| Title: this was hot so please update
Reviewed By: newdkidt [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2007 17:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i have to say my favorite part is when zexion striped i really wished that i was saix for that part i would jump on him in a sec. i really hope that you will write more i can't wait to see what kind of evil plan xemnas is going to do next. and Xemnas has the hots for demyx, i liked the chapter when xemnas had to be demyxs pet. if demyx is that nice i would hate to see him mad. i have to say for once in a life tamie was actually right
| Title: this is way awesome
Reviewed By: tamie On: January 16, 2007 17:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMGosh i just got finsh reading and i was wondering if you are going to write some more chapters. this was really good i told my friend newdkidt about it and she said when shes done she'll review.and i'll get a couple of my other friends to read it and hopefully they'll review. but i wonder whats going to happen to Axel and Roxas. and i so think that demyx and xemnas should so have a really hot moment together. i loved that xemnas had a dress on and they were all getting their fingernails painted.and it was really funny how demyx splash cold water on xemnas. and i love the games they play, but the sleep over was the best. my favorites are Zexion( he is so cool),Saix,Xemnas(b/c i think that evil guys are hot),Demyx( he so want xemnas),Axel(i love that he wears nothing under his robe).
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