| "Three Times A Charm" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
Title: CLAWING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Daxemon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2007 16:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
JADE.....one word....."clawing"............I swear if I could have exploded, imploded....whatever while I was reading this fanfic, I think I would have. My emotions were all over the map. You kept us in the dark for so long about Ryo that I felt like I was going to pull my hair out. I was so tempted to just skim and get to the end, but I was able to control my urges and calmly read. When I hit midway thru chap.... what was it..chapter 30 things seriously took on a life of their own. I PROSTRATE MYSELF BEFORE IN SUPPLICATION. YOU ARE MY QUEEN. (I know, may a little melodramatic, but I'm still coming off the high I got from reading this fanfic.) THANKS AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Whatwhatnow [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2007 11:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That had to be the best ending ^^! I love this story, and you did so well with keeping it together and having the characters stay, well, in character. Awesome! And I was so nervous for Ryo when Dee's shooter was killed >
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Reviewed By: Hana_Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2007 18:09 CST
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Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah....I can't read it, the format on the screen is all messed up!!! T_T I'm trying to piece it together because I've been waiting for the good part for a long, long time....finally they get to make up!!!
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Reviewed By: XZanayu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2007 17:23 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad that thinks are back to normal with those two and proud of Ryo for finally taking the lead for once. Way to go!!
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Title: aarrrgghhhh!
Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2007 21:42 CST
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it's about time dee figured out that they need to talk...all this dancing around makes me want to lock them in a closet (although i want to do that to them normally anyway)
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Reviewed By: XZanayu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2007 23:25 CST
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I love this story!! Please continue!!
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Reviewed By: Miztikal-Dragon (not logged in) On: January 01, 2007 18:44 CST
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OMG! two chapters! w00t! *does a happy dance* This is sooo awesome.. BIKKY! lol Children are so convient sometimes ^_^;; j/p, Well this is making me all giggly, and I really hope that you update asap cuz that would be wicked crazy! I tried reading chapter 29 on aff.net but the page wouldn't load up all the way, it made me all emotional! lol Well please keep up the fantastic work okay? I es be waiting for a new chapter. W00tness! I love all of your stories! Update ASAP! -Krystal-
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Reviewed By: Whatwhatnow [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2006 17:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is just amazing. I've been obsessed with this story since I found it. It is so well written that I wish Fake would have continued the manga... and followed your storyline ^^. You're amazing with getting the characters personalities worked out and I can just picture the whole story in my mind. Awesome work, and I can't wait to see what you write next!
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Title: YEEHAW.
Reviewed By: Pulse [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2006 16:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh crap. What was the second secret?
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Reviewed By: Dambae On: August 31, 2006 14:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am really enjoying this, as I've enjoyed your other stories, Jadeheart. Keep it up...I'm very much looking forward to reading the next chapters!
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Reviewed By: Gacktluvr [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2006 17:06 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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you are such a good writer! i'm so into this story and i can't wait to see the ending!!!this is way better than the real FAKE! keep up the great work! ^^v
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Reviewed By: Raven Black [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2006 10:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an absolutly wonderful story. What's the old saying? 'There's nothing more dangerous than a man who has nothing to lose.' Ryo is proving it right. He has gone a little phyco and that is understandable. But ahhhhhhh what a cliffhanger!!! You have me eagerly waiting for more!! Keep up the great work it really is an awesome story
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Reviewed By: MissDL [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2006 23:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like the way you write! I want to read more, and cant wait for the update! I think I'll go read something else by you now! ^^ Keep it up, and ignore the people who want happy stuff! Its never always happy! XD
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Reviewed By: hellcat805 On: July 28, 2006 15:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i can't beleive you only got 6 reviews for this story...well 7 now. i really enjoy reading it
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Reviewed By: Storybook Love On: July 19, 2006 12:35 CDT
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Okay that was the opposite of my fluffy ending....waaaaaaaaaant fluuuuuuuuuuff.... I'm a complete masochist, reading this story....
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Reviewed By: desertblue On: July 17, 2006 02:11 CDT
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you are such a good writer and i really like your cliffhangers so please keep up dating so i dont pull out my hair from the suspence
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Reviewed By: Storybook Love On: July 16, 2006 00:25 CDT
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You're being really mean to all of us who want to see Dee and Ryo together and happy.... I'm torturing myself by continuing to read this fic, but I can't help it! It's so good.... I'm gonna go curl up in my bed and cry now....angst angst angst, depression depression depression....where's the HAPPY?!? It'd better be coming soon.... I'd better not get to the end of the fic and find out I read the whole great, amazing, emotional rollercoaster story and then find out I didn't get my happy, fluffy ending....
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Reviewed By: Storybook Love On: July 10, 2006 03:19 CDT
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I'm gonna rip my hair out in five....four....three....two....NOW!!! 'Cause....with the depression....and the apart-ness....and the....GAH!!! GET THE DOPES BACK TOGETHER ALREADY!!! Yes, I am a very impatient person. Very very impatient. And I want those two together and happy. They WILL be happy if it KILLS THEM!!! They have no say in the matter. HAPPY HAPPY FLUFF FLUFF!!! This is what Storybook wants. Great story, even if all their apart-ness is making me want to cry. How can they STAND being apart for that long? I'm gonna kill someone. I need to shoot something. Where's Jack's monkey? ....Never mind.
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Reviewed By: Storybook Love On: June 25, 2006 22:39 CDT
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*cries* You can't leave it there! I need to know what happens! *glares threateningly* Update soon or I'm hunting you down and holding you prisoner until you finish the chapter and let me read it.
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Reviewed By: gretel_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2006 16:24 CDT
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Very hot, and very true to the characters. I like how you play off the combination of sexual tension and Ryo's reluctance/desire. Please keep it up!
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