Reviewed By: shishio [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2006 20:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your writting style is a little bit off, but I love where the fanfic is going. I can't wait to see Orochimaru's reaction to Naruto showing up. I mean, he's got the Kyuubi in him, the most powerful demon of the nine demons, so you'd expect Orochimaru to want him for power, at least a little bit. If not, then the Akatsuki will be after him, meaning Itachi will want to hunt him down. That and they can never go back to Konoha, meaning Naruto's dream of becoming Hokage will never come true, and he'll become a S Class missing nin do the the Kyuubi. It'll become rather confusing and mixxed up, so I can't wait untill I see what you've done with the story line. If you ever need a beta, e-mail me at fireprincess59@yahoo.com, I can beta for you.
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